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by lexjamandme

person tash1021
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
oh god i can picture it
GAI: the youthfully sunshine has finally come *hold naruto in a strangling bear-hug while tear flow freely down his face and a dramatic sunset takes place in the back round**
XD lol
person SerenityJade
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome!!

I look forward to the next chapter coming out!!


person isa_7
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute nickname for Naruto.
It really suits him.
person Meadhbh
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. Oh, damn, this is genius. I am cackling a great deal like a madwoman right now, and desperately enjoying the boys' pain. OF COURSE Gai would know Naruto, because that's just the way Naruto's luck likes to work out, isn't it? Such lovely, lovely mayhem there is going to be!
On a side note, I discovered 'For the Love of His Son' last week and more or less devoured it whole. I didn't review, because I am lazy and just generally somewhat useless, but I thought I would let you know that I adored it, and was absolutely delighted when I saw you'd started to write something else for these two. Please update soon, and I'll be waiting with the rest of your fan legion to see what comes up next!
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! It's so funny how they fight all the time but Sasuke seems protective of Naruto not getting seriously harmed. Thanks for sharing this new story! :)
person NiChee
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok...now u got me curious! pls update soon!
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I loved 'SOn" and now a new story! Yay! I couldn't stop giggling through these chapters. Itachi is Damien or something for doing this. And now Gai knows Naruto!! Too funny!!!
person Pomona
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! That's so funny! I love your style ^__^

Simply fantastic. I'll be impatiently waiting for more =)
person Jelp
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To: Excellent Authoress
From: Laughing Hysterically
Subject: GREAT CHAPTER!

LOL! Kakashi set up Naruto. HAHAHAHAHA. Poor Naruto. :-) I don't feel so bad for Sasuke. Poor Naruto (again). I guess Sasuke will be intrigued to find out that his parents died in a car crash on a rainy day, and that Naruto's father was (my guess anyway) some sort of corporate genius.

I really love the e-mails and the different personality inflictions you put into them.

Sincerly,
Jelp
Fellow Authoress, AdultFanfiction.net
person nyge98
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I have never laughed so hard in my life. Please write again soon.