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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, this story is starting off very good, I soo cant wait to read the second chapter and the new ones to come, but I wanted to just say, since I didnt get a chance to last night...I spent 2 days staying up till like 4am in the morning reading "For the Love of his son" You wrote that right?? I LOVEDDDD IT!...it was soo diffrent and although some might think the charactors a bit OOC I thought it was unigue and diffrent and I enjoyed it immensly I couldnt stop reading it, but I only had so much time and I had to break up the reading in half, well sort of I read to chapter 6 the first night then the last chappies last night till 4am...I loved it and it made me cry and want to rip people apart and think the impossible, which althought I loved your title, should of been named the IMPOSSIBLE, since it seemed to be the most used word in the story lol, but it was fantastic and I have a feeling this is going to be just a good, cant wait, much huggles and thanks for both awesome reads, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“I think someone needs to tell those two boys that foreplay doesn’t have to be that painful…”
HAHAHA! Best line ever...go Kakashi.
HAHAHA! Best line ever...go Kakashi.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G! THIS IS FREAKEN HILARIOUS. Loving it, absolutely freaken love it!! PLEASE upload as soon as you can. I can't wiat to find out what happens next. ahahahaha is that you sunshine? I like it. anyway i think should shut upnow bye! :)
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are hilarious! It took me an hour to read this chapter not because I am slow reader but because I re read half the story like 3 times. I especially liked the emails. So who was kissing who? Was it Gaara and Neji? And lawd that was so funny at the end well actually the entire story was funny. I feel so sorry for the victims of Itachi's happiness. Please update soon!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This story is hysterical. :-) Quite a different flavor from your last fic, and I really enjoy it. I really love how Sasuke actually launched himself over the conference table at Naruto as well. I also kinda feel bad for Sasuke's team. I think I would much rather be on Naruto's team than Sasuke's, though personality wise I guess Sasuke's team would be loyal to him.
I can't wait to see how you'll pull the two of them together, and I really can't wait to see how Naruto's and Sasuke's teams will react if/when they begin to be civilized to each other.
I don't know if anyone mentioned this in previous reviews, but Might Guy is actually Maito Gai in the anime/manga. I know in the original translations they had Guy intead of Gai, and I know that that's what it's supposed to loosely translate to into English, but the Japanese version is Maito Gai. Keep up the good work, and update again soon! ~ Jelp
I can't wait to see how you'll pull the two of them together, and I really can't wait to see how Naruto's and Sasuke's teams will react if/when they begin to be civilized to each other.
I don't know if anyone mentioned this in previous reviews, but Might Guy is actually Maito Gai in the anime/manga. I know in the original translations they had Guy intead of Gai, and I know that that's what it's supposed to loosely translate to into English, but the Japanese version is Maito Gai. Keep up the good work, and update again soon! ~ Jelp
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this a one-shot? Good it was so funny! Please write more chapters to this!
update!
update!
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an amazing intro! I love it already! Good writing and great setup, can't wait for more!
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, mel brooks shout out! :) Hope you dont mind random internet girls telling you they love you lol caaauuse here we gooo!! I LOOOVE you and this story! there were so many specially good parts that i cant even remember all of them to quote but just know i was impressed. Hope there is more of this coming, off to check if you have other stories on par with this one :)
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha! Excellent start! I like the whole 'our side vs. yours' thing, but I would have thought you'd trade Lee and Gaara since Lee is just as energetic as Naruto ans Gaara as stoic as Sasuke. (I can't really picture Gaara playing musical chaits or Lee calmly watching them 'enjoy their youth' without joining in or at the very least commenting on it).
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this it is so good