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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope there is more. This is so awesome there has to be more. Say there is more. Please, please, say it!
Sorry got a little needy there, but I do hope you add some more. This was so funny. Cubical wars. Teeheehee.
=)
person charmpit
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Lexjamandme is back!

Permit me to take this opportunity to thank you graciously for your work on For the Love of His Son. I enjoyed that very much. Consequently, I expect to enjoy this story as well.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
since i read for the love of his son and loved it by the way, when i saw your name i thought i would give your new story the once over and i have to tll you that i am very excited. this looks like it is going to be a hilarious story and written in your unique style which i think is awesome. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
person Kimra
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. :D Can't wait to see how it pans out.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I love this story already! XDDDD Itachi is the greatest *snickers* Poor guy, always having to break up his retarded little brother's fights...hopefully he can get some loving to ~_^

This story is just too great for words! There are a lot of stories that have them working in an office and whatnot but I haven't seen one like this yet!

Hahah, Itachi called them minions...that was the highlight to me *giggles*

I really look forward to the update!!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I'm not gonna lie the only reason I read this was because I saw your name on it but dammit just like your other work I am not disappointed in the least. I had to crack a smile like 3 times when I read Sasuke and Naruto's interactions and the results of said meetings. Dammit I can't wait to see whats next! Update soon.
person Thoru
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, are you good or are you GOOD? :) I loved it! Please do continue!
person Pixi
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best alternate-universe story ever!
person Raina
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this story looks like it's going to be awesome and it's so fricken hilarious! I like your writing style.
I can't wait till the next chapter!

Aikage
person akume
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maa, this was an awesome opening chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Ja.