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by lexjamandme

person despairs
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I frickin love this story! It's so hilarious...the way Naruto was jumpin over the table one time and then Sasuke did it the next HAHAHA!. Please tell me this isnt a oneshot *whimpers* Gotta have more *begs* Although if you intend for it to be a oneshot thats okay too because the ending was perfect.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I took a peek at your profile... Michele? with just one 'L'? like the male name Michele used in Italy? Could it be you're Italian? ^_^ It would be funny, I have never found other Italian Authors in the MalexMale section. If you're not then ok, sorry for asking. ^_^

as usual, I like your works. (I have read all of your other fic 'for the love of his son' and you managed somehow to write a SasuNaru fic that I actually liked. not to mention that you managed to make me walk past my HATE for Mpreg fictions, (and trust me, this is a great result!))

this is going to be a great story, I can tell that. so please please, update soon dear!

kisses,

hak
person Tall Tree-san
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I look forward to more of this story soon. Please update as soon as you can :)!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is going to be a fun story I can already tell. I love Naruto and Sasuke they are just to funny. I like how they both get under each others skin and just rub the wrong way and antagonize each other.

Great 1st chapter and I'm looking forward to your next update.
person BennyPeace
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha this sounds wonderful.
person Imagy
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wowzers,
I love it!
The first chapter was so hilarious
I was practically ROFLing throughout the whole thing
please, update soon~!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahahaha!

Ri: *looking down on T.W.* She's been on the floor for the past five minutes and has been laughing the entire time. I think it's safe to say she liked it.

T.W.: *claws up from the floor, to the keyboard still laughing* God that was GREAT! I absolutely can't wait to see what happens. I love they way you have a sadistic but not totally evil Itachi in this. Good job hun!
person noit
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi is a genius?! (OK....he's evil).
It would be great to see both Sasuke and Naruto in that whatever teambuilding activity.