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by lexjamandme

person Lechan
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say I liked this chapter very much. Like I said the ending will always be chapter 15 but I really do love the extra tidbits to the characters. I'm glad that Kakashi and Iruka didn't die in the fic. It would have made me very sad to see them go, and I believe that you are correct this ending is much more prefurable. Now as to the spoiler, I have a question for you, doyou think Sasuke will ever "turn good?" I do hope so, someone needs to make him start thinking on his own again.... *Sigh* Anyway, hope to hear from you soon.

schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh God,thank you for sharing the same thought on Sasuke.., he's the best example of an extremely thin line between genius and idiocy! *hate sasuke with all my might*
person Lane
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOuld we read it? What a question. You write it, we read it! That's the way things go.
And it also keeps us up till midnight... 6 hours of seleep aren't enought damn it!
Oh well, I think I'll deal...
It was worth it -sadistic grin-
Seriously, your story was awesome. What with the evil Devil Itachi, the bunnies, emails, smex, texts, and angst, it had me wavering between rabid fangirl, rolling on the floor with laughter, and almost crying because of the angst.
And okay, I may be exagerating, but it was really that good.
I would LOVE an epilogue.
XD Lane
person Leeana69
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE!!!! DAMN YOOOOUUUUU!!!!! XOOOOOOOO

:(
person nyge98
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would read anything you write. I truly love this story and I am really sad its going to be over soon. I hope the story continues.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I need more!!! Please post the epilogue! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Dace
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would indeed read it. ^_^_^_^
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps nonstop*

I loved it..though I was personally rooting for some KisaIta....^^

person Imagy
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN STRAIGHT
I would totally read an epilogue if you wrote one, hun
I love this stoy so much
I'm sad to see that it's ended
I can't wait to read more of your stories, though
especially the next chapter in All the Small Things
soo much suspence~!
in any event
this story was simply amazing
the characters, the humor, the drama
loved it all~!
'til next time, babe ^.^
person Vox
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn straight I would read an epilogue! How could I not want to read it? What IS the matter with you, I wonder?

The text messages: hilarious. Can you guess what my only wish was? Yep. I wanted Itachi to be happy at the end. Ah well. At least the kids and everyone are safe, and everyone is okay. Sometimes, that's enough.

Congrats on another finished series!