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by lexjamandme

schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Would I read it!? Hellz yeah! I'm so sad this story had to end as well. It was so funny and touching and sensual and dramatic. I loved what you did with Itachi in this one especially; his e-mails and texts were so funny and refreshing and they really captured his sarcastic wit and wry humor. It's too bad his wife had to die; I feel like he deserves someone of his own *cough Kisame cough* I hope the epilogue gives him some weasel lovin' XD

No, seriously though, this was a very touching and fun story. I enjoyed every chapter of it.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
of course we'd read an epilogue silly, i don't know about everybody else but this story just sucked me in and im sad that it's over so any way to get more is okay with me ^.^ besides, sasuke and naruto play house is the bestest, cutest ending to anything this long and angst filled, like a fluffy kitten at the end of an emotional roller coaster.

great fic by the way, simply stunning
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Yes! I'd SO read your epilogue! MmmmMMMmmm, what a delicious chapter. ::wipes away drool:: I must say again that I'm in love with your writing. ::sighs happily::
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yes. i certainly would read it. man this was a great story!! too bad it couldn't turn into a mpreg cause that right there would be a trip for both families. -laughs-
person Ramen_Lover_Forever
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU! and your sotries! ^-^ they are so cool!
you should TOTALLY write the epilogue thingy.
i'm totally going to draw the engagement scene where there in the couch ^-^
person xnamikazex
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT DO YOU MEAN WOULD I READ IT? Of course! This story is AMAZING. It totally rivals my other favorite on here(and favorite of many I am sure...) Spiral Falling. I mean, I absolutely love the caring-but-still-an-asshole-ish Itachi on here rather than the more common murdering/torturing Itachi. It seems to fit so much more. Oh, and tell me, did you make up Naruto's nickname of Sunshine all on your own or did you have other inspiration, hm?
person darktoy
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear, I have readed so far, and I have waited impatiently for the next chapter... What makes you think that I won't take up on your offer of an epilogue?
person jenjen
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I WOULD READ JOOR EPI! I loved this story - and... yeah Oro needed to be wacked. Good job! Lovely! Bravo!

Write your epiloque, I need just a bit more. =333
person orenjisun
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i would :)
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great end to an absolutely marvelous fic. I have enjoyed reading every chapter. And the answer to your question is "of course I would read it!" :D