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for Viva Forever

by ClaireBear

person Twiggies
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gosh!
They're so cuuuute!
Seriously, is there anything cuter than those two? xD
I don't think so!

This chapter was really good, once again.
Neji's so adorably cute and girly. xD
Hehe, the bathroom scene was so amusing. xD
And Sasuke on the other hand is the more taller and 'boyish' xD I'm loving it.

I really hope you keep writing and update soon again!
This fic is so amazing!
LOVE YA AND YOUR STOOORY !!
person Alpha2nd
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucky! I came to reread the 3rd chapter and what do I find? Chapter 4! ^_^ <-- is SUPER HAPPY. Emoticons can never really encapsulate (is that the word) capslocked words. Anyways, how cuteeee, so thats how it started. But his means that they knew each other for only a year or less? Haha, Itachi is such a jerk, how true. I'm really likeing how you're characterizing everybody in this story. There's only one thing though, I think you made a typo a few times. You typed "Hiashi" instead of "HIzashi" when referring to Naji's father a few times. Not that I can blame you. There's only one freakin' letter's different. Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter, looking forward to more!
person alpha2nd
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! How exciting. We're finally going to see what happened in the past? I love how you put Shikamaru as a psychiatrist, it suits him well. Is there anyway you'll be listing Neji's problems? Or will we just have to read it as you go along? Just curious. Anyways, great chapters!
person Twiggies
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Neji remembered Sasuke!
Hehehe, it was quite amusing how Sasuke referred Neji as a girl. xD
No wonder Neji is the ''wife''.

And Shikamaru just makes a perfect shrink!
With his genious mind, I'm sure he is very successful one, too. xD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
This is really good fic and I can't wait to see more!
person ren
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Should have been Naruto.
person Tyra
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awh. Poor Sasuke.
Heh, Naruto's a singer? Well, how fitting for that cheerful blond. xD
And Jiraiya was very amusing. xD He sure has a lot of women around him (or around his money).

I hope you will update soon again and keep writing!
I really like this story!
person Tyra
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yaaaay!
You're back!
Missed youuu.

I love this fic already!
Wah, poor Sasuke! That party turned out to be a little too shocking. xD
I wonder where Neji left, I mean when he was little.. Why didn't he contact Sasuke..? :OO
It must be his uncle's doings. xD

But I really love this fic!
You can write so good stories, and I love them, even if there weren't any smut in them at all! xDD

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Amazing fic this is!
person alpha2nd
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is really good. There are few that can pull off such an emotional (is a sappy sort of way) while keeping him in character an you are definitely one of them. I love your style of writing, very descriptive and while you are able to keep a serious tone you're also able to insert humorous lines without breaking the flow (well, imo). Anyways, Great (yes, with a capital "g") story, I wonder what will happen next...