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for 狐火 - Fox Fire

by Dynamo

schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far, hope you finish it sometime soon
person garsdal
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is still good, even tho i had trouble finding it again. (comp broke down and my favourites was removed)

hope you update it soon:D
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aha, and the plot thickens. Good chapter; cant wait to see what's going to happen.
person garsdal
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great fic all the way, hope the next chapter is up soon.

now tone it down before anyone sees my chakra.
*stares at ANBU*
"too late"
golden:D
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon please.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! The purple flames idea is a really clever one. It honestly makes a lot of sense. Now he's just gotta be equally clever about hiding it, seeing as how I doubt anyone would would like the idea that the fox and he have joined forces.
I also just wanted to say how much I enjoyed the isolated introspective Naruto has in this chapter. Really, fantastic work. Keep it up! ^^
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
naruto is in big TROUBLE.........wow i would seriuosly love to see what tsunade has in store for him!!!

PLEASE update when you can!!!

love ya!
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story update soon.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thrilled you've decided to continue with this story. =^^= (Also thrilled to be part of the reason. hehe.) Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D


The change from Sasuke to Sai was a good one, as it allows for the story to parallel more of the canon. Although there were a few typos I saw within it... nothing too serious, just stuff that spell check wouldn't pick up because they form different words, just the wrong ones. (Such as 'heven' instead of 'even') Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! Can't wait for chapter three! :D


*does a happy dance. ^^
person avatoa
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
S'all right man. Just get it up and running when you can I can already say things are going to be hilarious.