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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, I really enjoy all the witty dialogue and the “Sin City” atmosphere of the story. It almost has that “noir” feeling to it, with Sasuke as Ibiki’s “femme fatale” (love it) – and you know how these seedy underworld/crime stories always end up!
Poor Sasuke, he is sooo unstable, between Orochimaru and Ibiki driving him crazy. And that back-and-forth between Sasuke and Ibiki and Ibiki warring with himself was definitely trippy! But I can see Ibiki’s reasoning that Sasuke is actually trying to top from the bottom due to that Uchiha pride. But then again, in a twisted way, it seems like his pride would only allow Sasuke to submit to the best and welcome Ibiki’s painful dominance. Which of course leads to the question, “what the hell is Ibiki into?” Is it knife play? Brass knuckles to the kidneys? Chain whippings across the ass? Is Ibiki just as demented as Orochimaru when it comes to pain and torture, the one Sasuke actually fears? Inquiring minds want to know! Whatever the case, I fear for Sasuke’s sanity at this point in the story. And if he looses his sanity, how effective will he be as a Hidden Leaf Assassin?
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Poor Sasuke, he is sooo unstable, between Orochimaru and Ibiki driving him crazy. And that back-and-forth between Sasuke and Ibiki and Ibiki warring with himself was definitely trippy! But I can see Ibiki’s reasoning that Sasuke is actually trying to top from the bottom due to that Uchiha pride. But then again, in a twisted way, it seems like his pride would only allow Sasuke to submit to the best and welcome Ibiki’s painful dominance. Which of course leads to the question, “what the hell is Ibiki into?” Is it knife play? Brass knuckles to the kidneys? Chain whippings across the ass? Is Ibiki just as demented as Orochimaru when it comes to pain and torture, the one Sasuke actually fears? Inquiring minds want to know! Whatever the case, I fear for Sasuke’s sanity at this point in the story. And if he looses his sanity, how effective will he be as a Hidden Leaf Assassin?
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi,
again, my choice for the next chapie is Zabuza (an old time favorite). Question, is Haku with him or not? Guest, I'll find out when you write. Update any part of your story and you'll have a happy dance from me. Keep up with the good job. Love to see if Sasuke get his wish (I love when Sasuke is not pair with Naruto, very refreshing. Since, Ibiki x anybody is a very odd couple. And your fic portraits Ibiki having the hot for Gaara!!! and hopefully Sasuke aswell, maybe a 3some, ahhh!!! I'm perverted now). You got me hook on your fic. Write soon.
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again, my choice for the next chapie is Zabuza (an old time favorite). Question, is Haku with him or not? Guest, I'll find out when you write. Update any part of your story and you'll have a happy dance from me. Keep up with the good job. Love to see if Sasuke get his wish (I love when Sasuke is not pair with Naruto, very refreshing. Since, Ibiki x anybody is a very odd couple. And your fic portraits Ibiki having the hot for Gaara!!! and hopefully Sasuke aswell, maybe a 3some, ahhh!!! I'm perverted now). You got me hook on your fic. Write soon.
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I'm soo so excited for more!!! I'm loving this!
And lolol. The cake factory comment had me grinning like a fiend. Cause, gawds, it's SO TRUE!!! XD
Have you thought about making all of your various one shots chapters in the same story? You'd probably get many, many more reviews and hits that way. Which you totally deserve, btw, because they are all FANTASTIC! I mean they do all relate and tie in together, afterll. Just a suggestion cause you deserve the loving! :D
Oh, and I hope you don't mind terribly, there was one little typo I caught. In the paragraph where Ibiki is thinking about keeping Sasuke for his own personal reasons you said "blond" instead of "brunet". That was it! LOVED it! Can't wait for more!
P.s. I'm still voting for Naruto!
And lolol. The cake factory comment had me grinning like a fiend. Cause, gawds, it's SO TRUE!!! XD
Have you thought about making all of your various one shots chapters in the same story? You'd probably get many, many more reviews and hits that way. Which you totally deserve, btw, because they are all FANTASTIC! I mean they do all relate and tie in together, afterll. Just a suggestion cause you deserve the loving! :D
Oh, and I hope you don't mind terribly, there was one little typo I caught. In the paragraph where Ibiki is thinking about keeping Sasuke for his own personal reasons you said "blond" instead of "brunet". That was it! LOVED it! Can't wait for more!
P.s. I'm still voting for Naruto!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I knew it! This is going to be soooo good!! Aiieee!
Normally I just like Sasuke and Naruto together, but god, you've set up your Sasuke to need Ibiki! Plus I have a total weak spot for super slutty subbing Sasuke! He's my FAVORITE!!!
Muah haa haa! I'm so so excited for more of this! Yay you!
And I vote for Naruto! I'm curious as to what his role in this little world will be and how it interplays with Sasuke.
Great job! Fantastic! Can't wait for more!
Normally I just like Sasuke and Naruto together, but god, you've set up your Sasuke to need Ibiki! Plus I have a total weak spot for super slutty subbing Sasuke! He's my FAVORITE!!!
Muah haa haa! I'm so so excited for more of this! Yay you!
And I vote for Naruto! I'm curious as to what his role in this little world will be and how it interplays with Sasuke.
Great job! Fantastic! Can't wait for more!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“The scars should have made him ugly, but they didn’t. They just made him sexier in a completely subtle way...Here was a man who had obviously been through hell and been tough enough to walk away, and he wore the proof proudly on his body like medals of honor..”
Owww~! Yes, I felt that! That whole paragraph just NAILED Ibiki to a tee (sexy-roughneck!) I never even considered thinking about Sasuke and Ibiki in the same train of thought. But what an introduction and a set-up of things to come! And I just loved how you described Sasuke here as looking for someone WORTHY of his submission. That’s right up there with the group member who tells the wannabe-leader, “If you want to lead, then you better be able to kick MY @ss”. That is just so butch.
And I liked how you delved a bit into Sasuke’s past with Orochimaru, his homicidal hostility giving Ibiki a kinky “rise” of sorts. Given that, it would have been nice if the chapter was a little bit longer, but at the same time, I’m glad you were able to update. Because it will be so interesting to see how long either of them can keep their hands off each other on this mission to kill Orochimaru. Gee, I hope neither of them kill each other in a fit of “passion” ;-)!
Who to see next? Hmm. You’ve already mentioned Kakashi, so it would make sense if he appears. But Momochi Zabuza “Devil of the Hidden Mist” sounds sooo tantalizing!
Cookie~
Owww~! Yes, I felt that! That whole paragraph just NAILED Ibiki to a tee (sexy-roughneck!) I never even considered thinking about Sasuke and Ibiki in the same train of thought. But what an introduction and a set-up of things to come! And I just loved how you described Sasuke here as looking for someone WORTHY of his submission. That’s right up there with the group member who tells the wannabe-leader, “If you want to lead, then you better be able to kick MY @ss”. That is just so butch.
And I liked how you delved a bit into Sasuke’s past with Orochimaru, his homicidal hostility giving Ibiki a kinky “rise” of sorts. Given that, it would have been nice if the chapter was a little bit longer, but at the same time, I’m glad you were able to update. Because it will be so interesting to see how long either of them can keep their hands off each other on this mission to kill Orochimaru. Gee, I hope neither of them kill each other in a fit of “passion” ;-)!
Who to see next? Hmm. You’ve already mentioned Kakashi, so it would make sense if he appears. But Momochi Zabuza “Devil of the Hidden Mist” sounds sooo tantalizing!
Cookie~
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, the last chapter (Gaara) was fantastic. I love that little guy so much! And your writing is solid, so that was a great bonus along with the ideas you come up with. Anyhow, I must say I would like to see Kakashi next.