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for Lost in the Forest of Lust

by DarthValgaav

person diadem15
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I change my mind YES TO BOTH but would be cool to add Hanabi
person Texan
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes to both. Naruto has led a rough life and needs this. (lol)
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the question is can Naruto handle having over ten or more girls... I think three more girls would be good enough if you ask me but it is up to you the writer
person hellence
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice story so far, I say Isaribi
person jaxlax21
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. Only parts I don't like is the FemKyuubi. But I absolutly love how Hinata is the most important to Naruto, I think that it would be really good to hve a chapter dedicated just to her and Naruto. Also please just leave Sasame alone after this chapter, Naruto has too many wives at this point haha. But I love your hatred of Sakura, please put more Sasuke and Sakura bashing in here! Lastly I beg of you not to ever do anything with Hanabi, Naruto should only be with one Hyuuga.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter keep up the good work.
person Cyraxr
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off I say go for Kin as cat girl. Ok now what the bloody hell happened during the invasion and how did knowing about it before hand change things like did the third Hokage survive? And what happened when Sasuke left the village and did Tayuya survive or is that a yet to be seen? I asks these questions because your time skip was a bit big. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice chapter.. So Sasame is going to join his family now... And what happened to the retrieval mission or did you not want that whole thing in there right now...
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter can't wait for the next chapter so update soon.
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Sasame is like Kin and would make a good second maid to Naruto and the girls. I love the idea of Kin with cat ears and a tail, let her have them!