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That's a pretty big time skip you made here, especially considering not that many people even know who Sasame is or where she came from. Even porn needs more plot than this.

Again!! Another virgin!!! wth?

very nice

Dude, this is totally screwed up, perverted, and completely hot. Keep up the good work.

when thenext chapter or part commingout o_0

I really like the story so please continue it. On the time skip question I say do them with maybe highlights of what happened during them but that is up to you. And on girls would Tayuya be too much trouble to add because I think she would be an interesting addition to Naruto's family. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.

This story is great. One of the best Naruto stories I've read in a while It would be good if you did time skips are not thou I hope you will have a fight between Sasuka and Naruto in the Finals and if you do can you go into detail in stead of just saying who won. Also love what you have done with ino keep up the good work.

Well, things are certainly getting interesting! Keep it coming.

I love this story it is the best. I would like to see Sakura enter the harem and know just the way to do it to maybe suit your dislike for her. It takes place after sosuke leaves, let it be that he did more then just punch her in the stomach and say something more hurtfull then just "thank you". Naruto in his ever manly lady studliness feels sorry for her and sees her for the sad girl that she is. He decides to comfort her after stopping her from taking here life when she reviews her past and sees how she treated Naruto the same way sosuke treated her. You can go as fast or as slow as you want with this it is your story after all but I would like her to be in the "family". You can view it as Naruto "converting" her to the "true path".

Two thoughts:

A) Why is it such an issue in this that everyone must/should be a virgin before sleeping with Naruto? I'm slightly hard-pressed to believe Kyuubi was a virgin (kitsune are known for transforming into women and seducing men) and even a few chapters back, I was kinda wtf-ing about why Ten-ten felt the need to apologize for not being one when she slept with Naruto. It personally just doesn't make any sense to me. Is it supposed to be sexier? I just don't understand.

B) Heh, Naruto hasn't mentioned it to any of them yet that he's got the fox in him (well, partially right now, heh). I'm going to enjoy the next chapter at all the girls' reactions. Plus Temari's got a jinchuriki for a brother! Gaara and Naruto have not properly met as of yet. This should be good stuff. ^^

Keep up the good work!