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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like you to write down all the actions in-between them with no sex.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter can't wait for the next so update soon.
I say a series of time skips.
I say a series of time skips.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I love the introduction of Kyuubi. I can't wait to see how she gets along with the other girls and what part she'll play in the invasion.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, but a question has just popped up in my head. How is Jiraya going to pry Naruto away from the girls for the 3 year training mission. I seriously doubt any of them would want to go three years without him. Maybe he should take them with him. Naruto gets trained, the girls stay by him, and Jiraya gets to do LOTS of new research everyone wins. Oh and unless its important skip the time parts. hope you update soon.
Chaos666
Chaos666
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you rushed Kyuubi's entrance a bit, but the lemon part was good.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dont bother writing in the fights, theres no need. Might as well get on with the sex, which is sort of what this sight is about.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I found it hysterical that the girls were walking around the apartment naked and not caring. Keep up the great work!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wait, haku just shows up. like that. just out of the blue. ok, i'll buy it. goo job so far. write on my wayward author
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice and Sweet, although I think you should have done something with Ino.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. It seems like every 'virgin' he's with is like an uber kink. Its her first time and she's asking for icy cold anal? Damn.
Gotta say though, I loved Sasuke's little temper-tantrum about getting the same training Naruto's getting. >:) mwhahahahahaha!
Gotta say though, I loved Sasuke's little temper-tantrum about getting the same training Naruto's getting. >:) mwhahahahahaha!