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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Just didn't like the last chapter, probably because there's no sex :)
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think Kin will be open to being Naruto's sex kitten with the other girls. I can totally see her dressed in a cat costume with Hinata petting her while they're waiting for Naruto to get back from missions. I suggest Hinata dominate the other girls, probably with Kin's help, and that will settle the pecking order of the harem! But how will Haku come in? She's dead, unless things went differently on the bridge and we don't know it!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This felt like only part of a chapter to me. It was too short and lacked any real progression in plot (or smut). Not your best work by far.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...Could have used a little more detail.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, though it could be a little longer. If I may make a suggestion to few more additions. Ayame (ramen stand girl) and Hana (Kiba's sister) you rarely see either of them get Naruto and seeing how most of the girls are in might as well add them too. hope you update soon.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well sorr about not reviewing Ino's part i loved it i was just to lazy to do it at the time i also look forward to female Haku and Hinata being tied up some more and more thoroughly i love Ino getting dominated like a slut please keep her that way as well
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO not a cliff hanger I really cant wait for the next chapter keep it up, Maybe add Tayuya, I know i butcherd the spelling, Hanabi Hinata threesome is also good
Later
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, definitely one of my favorite chapters! That was pretty damn good I didnt expect Ino to react that way!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out pretty good. I do have a question though. Will Naruto ever gain a loyalty to Hinata only or will it continue to be a group fuck-fest?
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is all about the priorities. Heh.
"Must.. find.. teammates... wait! is that a moan?" hehehe. ^^
"Must.. find.. teammates... wait! is that a moan?" hehehe. ^^