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for Lost in the Forest of Lust

by DarthValgaav

schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so maybe turning Sasuke into a girl was a bit much but still it would have been fun so kin is a sub as well but i think they all should
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've got an idea for a humor chapter, though this would probably be near the end of the fic. Any way, Naruto finally finds his team. Before he actually rejoins them, he remembers how pissed off he is at them and decides to get back at them. Sakura goes off somewhere so Naruto enters the clearing in his Sexy no Jutsu form. He/She seduces Sasuke. Sakura comes back to see the love of her life screwing another girl. She about has a heart attack and passes out. Then, after the fun, Naruto steps away from Sasuke and drops the jutsu. Sasuke, realizing he just had sex with Naruto, follows Sakura's example.

schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the Chapter Can't Wait for the Next.
person Lemaon69
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow fantastic thanks for the chapter it would be great to see naruto,kin, and hinatu together but only after the exams and most likely with kin summiting herself to hinata and naruto as ther slave to do with as they please
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I can totally see Hinata and Kin being friends easily. But shouldn't Kin have mentioned where Naruto's team mates are or asked why he wasn't with them? Of course, not having him meet them is good!
person Rinnegan
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 was great.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the Anko/Hinata/Naruto I like to see Naruto/Kin/Hinata
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGLMAO>>>> Who the hell ever says "fill me with your sperm!"?


By the end of this little Forbidden Forrest sexcapade, Naruto is going to be the babydaddy of, like 15 kids. I just know it. (doh!)
person jjjklm
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I relli like how the story is going so far i cnt wait for it to be updated
truly i gr8 story Ja Ne!