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for Lost in the Forest of Lust

by DarthValgaav

schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say go for it... and for Shion I suggest that Kyuubi as the demoness help Naruto take the priestess. Sort of rape, but with Kyuubi warming the 'unwilling priestess' up first for her master.
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds good but dont make us wait to long for them
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok yes to shion and if she gets a honeymoon it should be role playing. i think kuybi should be more of a pet thing for her sex
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you again Darth, I love both your stories on AFF and FF, (I love naruto the Wind Lord) I like the idea of SHion joining to, but I think kinky is okay for the priestess (snickers) Horny Honeymoon is a fine title and very truthful when Naruto gets back. I also think Tsunade would be great for the family (no hands and knees). I feel sorry for Kyuubi 2 1/2 years alone with Naruto and Jiriaya (and they can't have happy time cause he would watch the whole with his notebook out, talk about a mood killer.) I honestly think Hinata will be the wildest one when Naruto gets back, the minute she sees him (cloths ripped off, knocked on his back, and ridden like a mechanical bull till next Tuesday!) I honestly can't wait for new story and chapters on your other stories as well!
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Shion should be in it, also could you add a chapter to this one letting us know when you have posted the first chapter of the new story?
person naruto86
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is good and can't wait for the next installment as for the title Horny Honeymoon is a good title as for Anko even if she doesn't marry him she can still love Naruto and Shion should definately be added. and I use a different email now: delahozomar@yahoo.com so if you send any replies thats my email.
person chaos666
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For Anko I say Shadow Clone gang bang. For Termari in the Hokage's office. I don't now much about Shion so I'll stay out of that. I won't ask you add any girls in seeing has you already have 3 of my favorite Naruto pairings (Hinata, Ino, Kin). Overall this was a good story and all the characters were used real well and I look forward to the sequel. As for the title how about Honeymoon fantasies.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It Sounds Awesome can't wait for it. I think you sould put Shion in it.
person Jin
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea for a sequel. I think Shion should be in the harem, and for her I think a little role-playing is in order. Maybe something along the lines of her being a poor little servent girl having an affair with her mistresses husband. Slightly naughty, and a real role reversal considering she's really a high-preistess.
person Georsama
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm, a lil late in reading this since its over...but for the sequel, well I agree with Soul there on his suggetion on Shion. She should/would have such a fantasy, it could prove fun. Also, Hanabi should be added, maybe its part of Hinata's fantasy (such a loving sister ^_^).

Anko: Gangbang most likely, or a lil D/s with her being the 's'. (Domination and Submission)
Temari: A little spanking, in the Hokage ofice, before the real fun. (For real spice, make it the Kazekage's office)
Kyuubi:...hide and seek...she seeks, Narut hides and when he's found well...she devours him! (In the good way)