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I could see Anko doing Naughty Teacher/Schoolgirl, Temari getting a spanking (make it somewhere interesting if you do), and Kyuubi doing a sort of evil demon of lust sorta thing (evil demon having her wicked way with a poor mortal). Not to sure about the others. Maybe a 'toys' one? Oh, a definitely need one of them doing a kage bunshin gangbang

Horny honeymoons does sound appropriate for the title... And yes I believe a scene with Shion would be awesome! A threesome of narutoxhinataxShion sounds hot to me.

About the only thing you didn't mention was bdsm.

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next story.

Very well done for the last chapter. I'd like to see Shion and Hana for the sequel. Ok, there's a lot of girls I'd like to see for the sequel; those two are just the ones I can make the best case for (I think). First, Shion is quite attracted to Naruto and even asked to have his children in the movie, so it's not really a stretch to imagine that she might go through with it. And Hana is an incredibly hot feral woman (doggystyle) that is almost never used. And given that Naruto is somewhat feral himself due to Kyuubi, he's likely to have a sort of animal magnetism so to speak that'd attract women who are more intouch with their baser instincts, like the Inuzuka clan (or possibly Yugito).

Very good. Though I think when Naruto get back he should dominate them all one by one. As a way to...give as good as he got so to speak. As for any other girl I would say have Yugito join in with a female Nibi and make only Kyuubi watch while tied up powerless because she didn't give him enough power during that orgy or replenish him in the morning when he was drained. Keep going.

Well, this looks promising. I really liked the chapter with Kin, although I absolutely despise her; I personally believe she's nothing more than a waste of time, space, and animation budget, but you managed to write something really good with her.

But as for the fight between Neji and Hinata... Damn, I don't know. It just doesn't seem likely that Hinata could beat Neji just by relying on a hidden kunai. Anyway, I'll read the next chapter soon and give my opinion on it. until then, take care and keep writing!

Tsunade should succeed with a cure

Might as well cure her I suppose. He's already proven that he'll love her regardless.

Well, I know you said that you wanted to get straight down to the point and you do, with an admireable efficiency. The actual sey scenes are pretty vivid and expicit and are written well, though I really feel some sort of plot and story is needed
P.S.: Tsunade should not find a cure showing that she is not almighty and fitting well with your theme of Naruto taking in women for wives who are outcasts, just as he is.