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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww... they were so close to both almost having what they wanted... darn it!
Gaara seems to be looking to cause some trouble. Also, where has Naruto been all this time?! It seems he's still been local to the area or something. A private school perhaps? This was the first chapter with a Naruto POV. Can't wait for the next one! ^^
Gaara seems to be looking to cause some trouble. Also, where has Naruto been all this time?! It seems he's still been local to the area or something. A private school perhaps? This was the first chapter with a Naruto POV. Can't wait for the next one! ^^
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I've been reading your fic and really like it. I would love to beta for you. Right now I've started betaing for Hakai's My Legal Drug. I have a lot of free time lately with it being my summer break from classes. I'm also an English major at college with an interest in grammar and editing. I would love to beta your story. My e-mail is wpalmerdrama@yahoo.com.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Please update soon.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. I love the flashbacks. Such sweet memories.
I can't wait to find out why Naruto had to leave. I get the impression that Sasuke and Sakura don't know (Sasuke seems to take it like abandonment) and it will probably be a while before Sr. Stubbornness sucks it up and confronts him. (Although I suspect Sakura will have a hand in it.) Keep up the good work!
I can't wait to find out why Naruto had to leave. I get the impression that Sasuke and Sakura don't know (Sasuke seems to take it like abandonment) and it will probably be a while before Sr. Stubbornness sucks it up and confronts him. (Although I suspect Sakura will have a hand in it.) Keep up the good work!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love tnis story and i think its going to a hit with my friends.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting start
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute. I love how Naruto is introduced into the story during the flash back. Outnumbered and overpowered, but given the opportunity, he still kicks ass. ^^ Naruto has to much life, energy and spunk to be kept down! I can't wait for your next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, i like this beginning. usually is sasu or saku doing the hurting, but this time is naru. can't wait to see where this goes.
carry on! ;-)
carry on! ;-)
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks good so far. Can't wait for more.
-Akiru-
-Akiru-