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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, for a virgin, you did very well!!! Okay, just kidding... but it was awesome!!! I think I speak for everyone here when I say... write more, write more!!
Slave
Slave
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Genma, yes, still awesome. Nice touch with some of the sounds (like the 'slap', doesn't that crack you up in real life LOL?) and the hummer...really loooking forward to the implied peril. More peril please!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good and hot. Especially for your first time writing yaoi. I love the depth you are giving to the other characters too. That pretty boy has one interesting talent. I am looking forward to what the next chapter brings.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I personally don't like it rough but reading about someone who gets off on it is just....HAWT!
Thats all I can really say. LOVE IT!
Thats all I can really say. LOVE IT!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I -love- this story, it's so awesome. I also love that you made side stories for 'Peaceful Waters.' I was hoping to know what happened in Genma's past. This is my first time reading a story about Genma and hell I think I just may want to read -a lot- more of them. I look forward to any and all updates on your stories! Awesome job for a first time yaoi as well. =) I look forward to more!
Revine.
Revine.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. Genma, amazing. He is a ninja after all, and I guess with that he could very well control that. I am wondering how much of his background story he is making up, training wise.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very believably written. Genma. Wow.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That is all I have to say about Genma's scene.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's dark.
And great. Convincing enough even if the drugs are made up, the story is nicely detailed and oh-so-spicy ^__^
And great. Convincing enough even if the drugs are made up, the story is nicely detailed and oh-so-spicy ^__^
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore Genma, so any story about him has my attention. This story sounds like it will have some meat to it, and it's intriguing already! Seamless writing and good pace. Looking forward to it very much.