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by Zelha

person Ryu
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch.

No this will be interesting. A pissed off Naruto along with a propably even more pissed off Hyugga Neji and Gaara, whose Sister is also held captive by Sasuke.

A full scale nuclear strike couldn't be worse than that.

But Sasuke seems to be interested in important girls lately. Sakura, Temari... Seems like he wants to get hand on them, cause they are close to the leader, aka future leader of their villages. Not a gentleman behavior to say the least.


I'm eager to read more.
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot loved the fast pace story yet the romance between sakura and neji took time, I can't wait for the next chapaters.
GOOD JOB!
person AndDown
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this has been very well thought out. Please continue with your Story!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg...your story just seems to get better and better! please keep up the good work, hope you update soon!! :D
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im confused what did Sakura Kill?
person katie
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this storey alot. will you be updating it soon?
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomg...omg!!! pleeeeaasssseee contiune the story soon!!! :D
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!

Amazing Simply Amazing!
The way you have Neji slowly acting on his feelings and how you have everyone's personalities done perfectly makes this story a great read...

Hoping for some lemony action in the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOO update update update!!!!!!!~

How can you end it there!!!!!~


I want my lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hooray!!!!!


whistles and bells! first kiss huzzah!