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by Zelha

person Angelic
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... this is a great fic and it is only at 3 chapters... ;_; please update soon! I love it!
person Lunar84
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A new Chapter! Loved the scene with Sakura sucking jam off of her finger. Naughty Naughty Neji. Chapter flowed very smoothly. I'm really liking this fic. I look forward to more!
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WooooooHooooooo! I hope she embarrasses the hell out of that old coot! Stuffy bastard! Great story! I really like it so far. Please keep going and update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter! It should be a good one! =^_^=
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like this chapater and can't wait for the next one.
person Ryu
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. Hiashi's in for a surprise.

I can guess of nothing that pisses a woman like Sakura more off, than that comment of Hiashi about her abilities.

A very interesting story so far with a surprising pairing.

I'm eager to read more of this.

I almost feel sorry of what will happen to the Hyuga Training Grounds. An erathquake Level 9 on Richterscale couldn't be more bad than an anry Sakura.
person Trigger
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaat! cliff hanger you...grrrrrrrr darn u to animeless hell!
person Trigger
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jk i really do love the story. I love the idea of sakura with a seal,its the first ive seen and i hope to see more
person Lunar84
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic so far. It seems very well written and flows smoothly. I like that the first chapter is fairly long and gives the readers a good idea of what this fic is based on. Grammar and spelling seem perfect as well.

The idea of Sakura with a seal is an original one. It seems very interesting. Personally, I will read any Sakura pairing as long as it is written well. I don't usually come across Neji X Sakura fics that are written decently. But, this one looks like it will indeed be something to look forward to.

I hope you can update as soon as possible. This fic looks very promising.

Can't wait for the lemons! ~_^
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so far...nice length...cant wait for some H to go on...
person gaara89
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems interesting, I'd like to see an update sometime soon!