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by Zelha

schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked. This story has definitely roused my curiosity. Very few grammar and spelling errors, if any. I was to wrapped up in the story to care, much less pay attention. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Uh-oh, Neji is in for it now. LOL
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
verrry nice start. look forward to reading the rest
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far but is she 16 or 19? In the manga when they go save garra the rookie 9 are 15 and neji, rocklee, and tenten are 16. But, it's your story and you can make her any age you want:). Well I can't wait for the next update and I hope you update very soon. I know I am going to like this fic because I like fics with sakura and neji together.