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by NTP

schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot hot hot hot, cant wait to see what will happen. kind of interesting premis, but non the less intrueging
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not bad. please use spaces between paragraphs and update soon.
person sarge
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please update soon i want more :)
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm this is interesting i think a few more girls should be added just for the sake of it and beause it works
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is pretty damn good. You might want to use the Enter button to give a line of space between paragraphs, but aside from that, it's all good. Keep it coming.