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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I hope that you will continue to add to this fic. I love the idea and its really great writing. Please don't wait to long to post more. If you'd have any chapters written don't hesitate to just email it over.
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! The plot is grand and the character dynamics are wonderfully interesting. Poor Sasuke, he's so unacquainted with sex it's depressing, but I'm glad that Naruto is willing to bend to his benefit; it seems like a very 'Naruto' thing to do. Keep up the good work; can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more of this story. It's great. It's strange but it pulls you in nonetheless. I'm wondering about Naruto, because he seems to be in a bad way regarding Sasuke. I wonder if Sasuke will do something to really make him snap. It'll be very interesting to see.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely plot. o:
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this really intrigued me ^__^
I like how Naruto and Sasuke both grew up in different places and environments AND that Minato is still alive!
I'm really fascinated how obsessed Naruto is with Sasuke and I'd love to read how their relationship goes on.. especially if Sasuke 'warms up' or maybe Itachi and Orochimaru (if they are going to make an appearance.. (Naruto getting all angry and jealous if Oro shows up and wants Sasuke, but that's just me~))
Anyway, whereever you plan to take this ff, I'm looking forward for the next chapter ^_^ keep up the good work!
I like how Naruto and Sasuke both grew up in different places and environments AND that Minato is still alive!
I'm really fascinated how obsessed Naruto is with Sasuke and I'd love to read how their relationship goes on.. especially if Sasuke 'warms up' or maybe Itachi and Orochimaru (if they are going to make an appearance.. (Naruto getting all angry and jealous if Oro shows up and wants Sasuke, but that's just me~))
Anyway, whereever you plan to take this ff, I'm looking forward for the next chapter ^_^ keep up the good work!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The plot is perfectly solid! Hahaa, the sex scene was hilarious! Oh Kami, I can so see Naruto just jumping right up and not caring if he was naked or not and he was so nice to Sasuke. I can't wait for another update, keep them coming long and strong! ... O_O Hmm, that didn't sound right....
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe, poor Sasuke. Thats a hell of a situation. I don't think I could -not- kill myself.
I love this XB.
I love this XB.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This is fantastic! I especially love the line, "He was dead the same as if his father had slit his throat in their yard instead of patting his head." That was harsh and the contrast between the cut throat and the head pat was just, man, it sent shivers down my spine!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesaome fic, update soon!!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great fic cant wait to see where it goes, i think naruto should be more posessive of sasuke though, hes been obsessing over him for years after all