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by fujinakaheero

person Charlie
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At least you gave us lemon on the next chapter.
Love the story. Please update soon.
person Telpei
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, cliffhanger evilness!! >_< I really like this story so far, it seems really interesting! It's not often that Naruto sets out for revenge. I can't wait to see what scheme he has planned... I still can't believe he joined Akatsuki, but I can understand why he was driven to do it. That evil council! They're so mean :(

Cute ItaNaru fluff! It's really too bad that (in this fic at least) Sasuke didn't realize that his brother was a kind person. I just read the latest chapter of the manga and...well, Itachi is not a nice person. I'll leave it at that. Anyway, is Sasuke going to get with Naruto? It would be intersting to see how Naruto would deal with it... would he just use Sasuke as a substitute for Itachi? Will Sasuke find out the truth behind the past two years of Naruto's life? >_< So many questions that need answering!

Please update soon! I look forward to your next chapter :)
- Telpei
person sabine
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! please continue writing more chapters!!!! your rock!!!
person mls
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work
person taiintatsu
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey love your story it was a good start. if possivle i would like to know when you update thanks
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! i liked the sexy bits. I wish that Itachi really was kind in the manga, but alas he is not. *pouts* Anyway, you should edit again to weed out the tiny mistakes, but otherwise it's very good so far. Keep it coming. I liked the way you ended it, taking my idea and all. *grins*
person Halskr
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I cant say I am all that fond of dark Naruto stories. This one is well written. It will be interesting to see how you reconcile Sasuke and Naruto. That is a pretty deep chasm to cross. I am interested on what Sasuke felt about Naruto's treatment from the council. Does anyone else besides Tsunade, Sasuke, and the council know what was to happen to Naruto before he left? Thanks for sharing this.
person I.Drowned.My.Goldfish
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just can´t help but review this. I haven´t even read the first chapter yet (I will do that after this) but I just need to say± Excellent title! Rofl xD I´m a huge TH fan myself so... I will go read it now and perhaps review later again ^.^
person courtney
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this looks interesting. and tokio hotel is my favorite band! awesome that you mentioned them. i'm going to their concert in new york next month. the song does fit.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I have a feeling things are going to get messy. Naruto's friends should've been told about what the Council had wanted. All that work and demoting him? that's horrible! Update soon!