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angst angst angst and I love it! The whole thing ^_^. Poor Genma, but you write his nervous breakdown so well, just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter, it really does make you see Peaceful Waters in a different light, with the not wanting to get Sakura pregnant thing... sweet...

Hey! Awesome story you have going here! I looooovee it. Not too many people focus on developing the back story for a secondary character this much, and I must say you have gone out of your way to make it legitimate.
Having said this, I would like to add one tiny bit of criticism, in that, at the mention on Genma's mother, you say she is an actress in Kabuki theatre, however, women are not allowed to act in Kabuki, nor any kind of Japanese theatre.
But really, other than a slight oversight in historical information, this is a great story and I can't wait for you to continue.

KaS

Hey girl, another awesome chapter. This story pisses me off and makes me want to cry at the same time. It pisses me off because of what that bastard did to Genma, and it makes me sad that poor Genma constantly gets the shit end of the deal. I love these three stories with all of my heart. I'll be waiting for the next update on any of your stories!
Ja Ne,
Revine.

Oh yeah, I definitely needed to read this to understand that last chap in Peaceful Waters. That was incredibly heartwrenching and Genma's break down could be felt intensely. Will Genma finllay find happiness with Sakura or will he be a reclamation project?

wow... this fic is so deep... cant wait to find out what happens next on this sidefic and also when he finds out that sai was his son's best friend in PW... can you please email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you update this... thankz... and keep up the great job... +^_^+

You know...I really hate Danzou! Good one! It does answer alot of the questions PW. Excellent work! You are so talented.....
Update soon!

T.T You pretty much had me crying. It hurt me heart so bad for poor Genma to have to go through that. I look forward to more updates to any and all of your PW story and side stories! I love this and...ummm....hmmm if you updates soon I'll....I'll bring your favorite Naruto character to live for you to have your way with him? Lol I wish I could do that...-.- Though there's so many that I'd want. =P I look forward to updates!!!
Revine

I'm loving all of the side stories to PW. I tried reading this on FFnet but there was a problem loading the site. This was really good. It really helps clear up the story about Sai's "brother". I can't wait to read the next chapter of Undressed and PW.
Rox

you have such a way with words, these stories really come to life!

Very heartwrenching! I look forward to more!