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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story, if you continue is i would recomend that you put the next part/chapter in this one instead of making a new post, it would make it faster for people to find the next part and so on.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok your story isn't bad although it does lack a few details try adding what the characters are feeling and how fast or slow naruto is putting his dick in them is he going in fast or is he teasing them by doing it slowly.
btw it might be a little hotter if you added some mild bondage a blindfold and a shadow clone or 2 too the next part in the series. so basically get a bit more creative and make the chapters a little longer
btw it might be a little hotter if you added some mild bondage a blindfold and a shadow clone or 2 too the next part in the series. so basically get a bit more creative and make the chapters a little longer
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's about damn time someone wrote something original. I don't see enough or hardly any naru/hina/saku fanfics. I personly like this 3some the most, but it nice to see some naruto fanfics without that annoying sasuke in it. You have my full approval to continue this as a seris cause that was just hot......hot...hot.hot hot hot owww damn it it burns. Ideas......not sure but I've seen enough fanfics that this might turn into a harem. I like harems and all but please avoid that stupid idea of the CRA(clan restoration act) it was a good idea...before thousands of people input this element just to allow naruto with multiple women. Although, if I got the wrong idea and you keep this entirly lemon...hell go all out!
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very much at the same level than the first chapter. It could use a bit of brushing, but I like it well enough.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait for the next one. Just keep doing more of the same and I'm liking you getting Ino involved. You may want to try geting Tsunade or Kurinai (sorry, my spelling sucks) involved.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! I would love to see this become a longer story. Tell next time.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, amazing! Can't wait for the next one with Ino joining them!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please, great story
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for making another sakura naruto hinata story. please make a 3rd one with ino soon and heres an idea what about the three of them dominating naruto or naruto totally dominating the three with 2 or 3 kagebunshins each girl. update soon
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah, nice follow up. I can't wait to see Ino get involved in the action. But after that, can the girls remember Naruto's Sexy no Jutsu and try having a female Naruto join in on the fun?