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for Another Bet

by Hestia

person Leeana69
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Zabuza at the end. :snickerfit:

Oh man, My mother's a slave, so whenever I read one of these fics I have to put it out of my mind or I'll start thinking about things I really don't want to be thinking about. :p

Excellent story as always. :salutes:
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)

Jeez, that’s a lot of stuff. The BDSM and D/s stuff is wild. This story and its prequel are, I think, the first stories I’ve read that really covered that area. . . . I liked the terms of this bet. . . . (*snort*) Love Zabuza’s part in the story. X3
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well... that was so DAMN HOT again! Great sequel. I'm happy you wrote one.
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still kinky. Still good.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hooray, there actualy was a sequel! definately hot (now doesn't that seem to be the word of the day when it comes to reviewing my master hestia's fics?), but far too short >_< i want more. and whipped cream! gimme more details on the vast and exciting array of internet purchases, don't just skim >_<. for the love of god! ...

anyway, in conclusion, hawt, but not enough!

ps, you are not my fanfic smut god.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so much fun! Those two! LOL... Zabuza screaming fag! That was rich! Nyah!!! Good one... really... my pet? I loved this short one... disjointed much?
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoooo!!! i LOVED the first one and this one was a nice lille PWP rounding it up. I know this is a oneshot so i'll prob never know, but this one made me wonder if there was some underlying reason why naruto feels the need to beg sasuke and have him degrade him??? It jus seemed like you were hinting at something... or could just be naru darling is into that kinda play hott hott hott. Just curious still.
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooorrrrr not! LOL i just checked out some of your other stories O_o
person enchants
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god, I love you..

you should have written the paddling scene.. or from Naruto's pov.. that would have been so hot.
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MmmmmmHmMMmm...this was soooooo good. ^_^ wow! and to make Zabuza the angry neighbour. haha!