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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn that was crazy. i like the story line so far. very sad how you made naruto leave so early. kind of the reverse of what originally happened. but the one that stayed behind is an asshole. i love narusaku. can't wait to read more
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't like the rape element, and as long as she doesn't get pregnant from it, and ends up with Naruto, I can deal. Besides that, GREAT story so for, I have to say! But, then again, as my name implies, I'm completely obsessed with NaruSaku....
Also, it is Shishou, just to let you know...
Also, it is Shishou, just to let you know...
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Good plot So Far. I Hope she gets away Soon, or Naruto kicks the living crap out of Sauske!! Can't wait for you to update. Please Update ASAP!!!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While I understand the rape is a way to further the plot and create angst, I just not a fan of that plot device. I understand its your story and I suppose you need it for your story but it will be hard for me to re-visit this story. I'm glad its a NaruSaku story don't get me wrong it is just difficult to read for me. I'll probably try to read this story again but who knows. Good luck and hope to see more of your work soon.
K4L
K4L
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good. i love it. very stroung start can't wait to read more
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Im hoping for an update soon? :)
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Job!!! Can't wait for the Next Chapter!!! Please update ASAP!!!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, look forward to reading more.
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this NaruSaku?
I hope so. We need more NaruSaku on these stories.
I hope so. We need more NaruSaku on these stories.
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. Kinda had an idea like this of my own just haven't worked all the details out. Glad to see a NaruSaku story on here. Don't see too many on this site. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
K4L
K4L