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March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I definitely enjoyed that story >:)
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October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As I have mention, I read both this and 'So Natural' side by side to follow the stories and the characters consecutively. I also mentioned that this is one of my favorite pairings, along with Shino/Ino.
Both pairings just have those personalities and traits that are complimentary and make it easy to fall for them, wanting them to be together. You've made me fall even more in love with these pairings.
And I agree about this last chapter, the sexual tension had been building for the longest time. He knew, after all, and wanted her to come to him, basically.
Man, now I begin to wonder exactly when these two boys had been in love with the two girls. Especially having known them for most of their lives. I began cheering for these couples when they were genin, actually.
Ahh, but honestly, thank you for these as they are a rare treat.
And can I get the magazine with Gaara doing his posing? And what if the girls did some posing of their own?
Keep up the awesome writing.
Both pairings just have those personalities and traits that are complimentary and make it easy to fall for them, wanting them to be together. You've made me fall even more in love with these pairings.
And I agree about this last chapter, the sexual tension had been building for the longest time. He knew, after all, and wanted her to come to him, basically.
Man, now I begin to wonder exactly when these two boys had been in love with the two girls. Especially having known them for most of their lives. I began cheering for these couples when they were genin, actually.
Ahh, but honestly, thank you for these as they are a rare treat.
And can I get the magazine with Gaara doing his posing? And what if the girls did some posing of their own?
Keep up the awesome writing.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES I will admit this story is so damn good its my second time reading it! I had tp it's so damn sexy and hot and I really hope you make a sequel I'm off to read about ten-inch Shino and Ino now haha can't wait lmao
Loves Arry
Loves Arry
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
beautiful!! (cries) Kiba Sakura is one of my fave pairings and you are seriously one of the best writers on this site! I loved the whole thing, and i thought that you really played Kiba well. I think he would be good naturally... (dreams) but oh well. Your story is awesome... mabey you could write a Neji TenTen story? there are so few stories with them and they're another fave couple of mine and i think you would be the best to do the pairing justice. but you are a great writer and I look forward to more stories.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! now that's hot stuff!!!!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, again!! I've read this fic like a dozen times! It still gets me uh...never mind. But awesome! Thank you for writing about Shino and Ino in "So Natural"...did I get the title right? Oh well, you know the fic you wrote that is right next to this one? Anyway, I think these two hunks don't get enough lovin'. They are so hot and NOT GAY!!! Thank you for writing these two fics! Keep it coming on the other one. Oh, would you consider a sequel to this? Maybe even adding an extra chapter with after the initial fornication, shall we call it? Either way, drop me a line if you are interested. I have ideas galore, but little talent in the writing department. That I leave to the truly gifted...like yourself! Excellent work!!
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I usually don't like Het, but I must make an exception. I'm Bi, more gay then straight though. The first part was really good. I'm not very experienced when it comes to sex practices, (ie. I'm a virgin, lol), and I never knew what I was doing was normal, edging and all. Most men want to get it over with, but I can go for hours, I spent 5 hours once, took the whole night. lol, srry for the gory details. I'll keep reading and tell you what I think. So far 5 stars! ;)
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say HOLY HELL!!!! That literally made me have a orgasm I'm going to be frank that was too freaking hot. Wow highly Satisfied reader here! I wish I could make my lemons that fuckin sexy but some day I shall I sware. Well I hope you do, do an epilogoue or something and a shino/ino just is yummy too hell I think any pairing you do I'll love! Can't wait for your next story!
Loves Arry
Loves Arry
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved it. that was so sweet that he was in love with her for so long. Nicely done.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um-yeah!! That was hot!! I would like to read a continuation.
Rox
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