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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY FOR DIRTY SMUT!!!! That was what I was waiting for. *fans herself* Awesome Job! Honestly I didn't find this lemon lacking what so ever. I thought it was written wonderfully and couldn't have gotten any better. I thought it was sweet that he had deeper feelings for her than just lust alone. That turn really surprised me. Not a bad thing, I just didn't see it coming. ~no pun intended~ heh... Anyway, once again great job looking forward to more fics! I think you would do a wonderful job on a longer chaptered fic. I love those. Just sitting back and reading a loooong fic for a few hours. You definately have what it takes to keep anyone entertained for that long. Keep it up!
-Britt
-Britt
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew!!! That was totally hot!!! BRAVO, AWESOME!! Excellent fic! Yes, please give Shino (my favorite, then it's Kiba), some love...please!!! Great work. I am looking forward to any sequels and/or updates.
Oh...I need your help, if you can. I read a lot of fics here and on ffn. I was reading a fic about Naruto and Sakura. I don't remember the summary, but it started with Naruto and Jiraya (did I spell it right?) coming back to Kohoha after 6 years, making all the rookie 9, 20 years old. Neji is with Tenten and Shino and Hinata are engaged (don't see that pairing, but oh well). It was 2 chapters long if I am not mistaken, but stupid me didn't write down the title of the fic nor the author like I always to...had company coming over and they got here sooner than expected. Anyway, if you come across it, could you email me? My email is not hidden so if you need to pass the word on, please do. Thanks, and congrats! Awesome fic!! MORE, MORE!!
Oh...I need your help, if you can. I read a lot of fics here and on ffn. I was reading a fic about Naruto and Sakura. I don't remember the summary, but it started with Naruto and Jiraya (did I spell it right?) coming back to Kohoha after 6 years, making all the rookie 9, 20 years old. Neji is with Tenten and Shino and Hinata are engaged (don't see that pairing, but oh well). It was 2 chapters long if I am not mistaken, but stupid me didn't write down the title of the fic nor the author like I always to...had company coming over and they got here sooner than expected. Anyway, if you come across it, could you email me? My email is not hidden so if you need to pass the word on, please do. Thanks, and congrats! Awesome fic!! MORE, MORE!!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bad Sakura! What a lucky girl. *sigh*
Once again amazing work! The chapter flowed very smoothly and I saw no grammar mistakes.
Can't wait for the next update! Smutty goodness on its way. I hope you continue to write after the completion of this fic. It would be a shame not to continue to share your gift with all of us. That and I'm just selfish and it's hard to find decently written fics nowadays.
Once again amazing work! The chapter flowed very smoothly and I saw no grammar mistakes.
Can't wait for the next update! Smutty goodness on its way. I hope you continue to write after the completion of this fic. It would be a shame not to continue to share your gift with all of us. That and I'm just selfish and it's hard to find decently written fics nowadays.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to this story and I like the pairings. I am really curious about Shino and Ino. Please don't keep me in suspense too long;) Looking forward to more!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! My two favorite guys...okay I have a thing for the elder Aburame too, but hey this is a fantasy world right? Hurry with the update!!! PLEASE!!!! AWESOME!!!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For your first time attempting to write a fic, I would like to say this is really terrific. You have talent and it shows through your writing. You actually write better than most of the authors on this site. I mean that honestly. I'm not blowing smoke up your ass either.
You've selected a pairing that doesn't get much attention. I, personally, like Sakura with anybody as long as it is a well written fic. The story flows well and I like that you're very descriptive in your sentences. Your grammar and punctuation seem to be top notch as well. Though I know my grammar and sentence structure sucks I'm a stickler for reading a fic that is well written. I hate when I come across a story that looks as though it was slopped together in 5 seconds. If the author doesn't take the time to look it over why should I read it ya know. But, I'm getting off topic sorry ^_^
The point I was trying to make is just by reading this fic it appears that you've taken the time and consideration to make sure your fic is up to par. It shows you care about what you do. Therefore, I will continue to look for new updates. I'm interested to see how Sakura approaches Kiba in this situation. And what his reaction will be. Hopefully a chapter of nothing but smutty smut smut ~_^
Update when time permits please!!!!!
-Britt
You've selected a pairing that doesn't get much attention. I, personally, like Sakura with anybody as long as it is a well written fic. The story flows well and I like that you're very descriptive in your sentences. Your grammar and punctuation seem to be top notch as well. Though I know my grammar and sentence structure sucks I'm a stickler for reading a fic that is well written. I hate when I come across a story that looks as though it was slopped together in 5 seconds. If the author doesn't take the time to look it over why should I read it ya know. But, I'm getting off topic sorry ^_^
The point I was trying to make is just by reading this fic it appears that you've taken the time and consideration to make sure your fic is up to par. It shows you care about what you do. Therefore, I will continue to look for new updates. I'm interested to see how Sakura approaches Kiba in this situation. And what his reaction will be. Hopefully a chapter of nothing but smutty smut smut ~_^
Update when time permits please!!!!!
-Britt
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. Like the pairings and looking forward to more
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job. looking forward to more.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um- Monster canon, foot-long hard man-meat!! Priceless. Um- Do you have Kiba's number? That was hot!! I can't wait to read more.
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