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for Hidden in the Leaves

by Totaltruth

person charmpit
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Clone smex. Hotness.
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you've certainly captured my interest. I can't wait to read more. Well written.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! and very sad, but also angry. i loved it.
person Lola
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Was it just a oneshot or will you write more?
person Telpei
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love the way you captured their love/hate relationship. Sasuke wasn't too lovey-dovey, but his feelings were still there and you could tell he cared for Naruto in his own way. And of course Naruto was his usual sentimental self, but at least he was understanding, and his promise never to give up on Sasuke was as strong as ever. I really enjoyed the characterizations of this story... not to mention the hot treetop sex XD I have to wonder what that bite-mark was all about... Was that Sasuke's way of marking Naruto? Is it a cursed mark? Why didn't Kyuubi heal it? *ponders the implications* Anyway, great work, I really enjoyed it! :) You should write more like this. Will there be another chapter to explain the mark that Sasuke left?