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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. chapter three has the best banter by far! Great job with the back and forths. I'm really enjoying it. ^^ Keep up the good work. Can't wait for chapter four!
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor gaara is so confused. his life hasn't gotten to the weirdest it could get yet. hahaha i look forward to the reactions of gaara and naruto along with the rest of gaara's siblings. Yay!! looks like gaara and naruto are gonna be parents!! hahaha update again soon!! ^_^
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, the pieces are there if you know what to look for (with or without the warnings on the summary.. lol)
it has potential. would like to see how you approach this one and am looking forward to the next parts, whenever they come. *cheers*
it has potential. would like to see how you approach this one and am looking forward to the next parts, whenever they come. *cheers*
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your writing style. I dunno why but sometimes more often than not, Naruto Mpreg writers don't write very well. At least your's makes sense, it's clearly written it's funny. It's overall a good beginning. I hope to see more soon. Gaara is hard to write and you do it well.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Nods* You have indeed held my interest so far! I'm just really excited to see what comes next! Heck, I just might do some fan art for this after a few chapters X3...with your permission of course. I've already done fan art for one person's story on FF.Net...If you're interested in letting me do some fanart, drop me a line at my email kagenoshiseisai@aol.com.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holycrap... an m-preg that isn't painful to read. In fact it's more than enjoyable. Your narrative is pleasing, although the story-flow could be a bit smoother, and there is no more OOC than can be explained away by the extraordinary circumstances of this fanfic. I can honestly say that I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued, It seem like you have a really great story started here. I love the Suna siblings. So you have may full attention. I hope your writing experience goes smoothly for you. *huggles*
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update, I think the thing I am truly looking forward to in this story is Gaara's and Naruto's reactions to the news that will surely fall upon them sooner or later. :D
I also am looking forward to seeing how you further torture Kakashi... maybe Naruto and Gaara will make him the god-father and have him babysit... rofl.
I look forward to the next update. *hugs* Ja ne.
I also am looking forward to seeing how you further torture Kakashi... maybe Naruto and Gaara will make him the god-father and have him babysit... rofl.
I look forward to the next update. *hugs* Ja ne.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww so cute!! this is gonna be so good i can tell already!! update again soon!!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute, a little prego Gaara. can't wait for more :)