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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you should write about them takin their relationship more further. or sasuke gettin pregnant.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a few things to help you in the next chapter, One we all knew the village hates Naruto. well some of them work off of that concept with Sakura backing it. if you need anything else I can help just e-mail me I'm layed off from work and boooorrreed as heck
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you can always have those two finally consumate their relationhip and have Sasuke get pregnant with his and Naruto's child/children. Get married and hopefully leave Konoha finally. Since Konoha doesn't won't to except Naruto fully or see Sasuke as nothing more than an Uchiha breeder. Hope this helps.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i enjoy reading this story very much...it is one of my favorite....
hmmmmm...abou the next chapter....maybe you should write the sex scene and something with Sasura getting mad...it will be cool...and maybe if you had want ypu can make Sasuke pregnant....and in tne next chapter write how the pregnansi had been going...
P.S. sorry if there is any mistaikes, i am still learning this language.. :)
hmmmmm...abou the next chapter....maybe you should write the sex scene and something with Sasura getting mad...it will be cool...and maybe if you had want ypu can make Sasuke pregnant....and in tne next chapter write how the pregnansi had been going...
P.S. sorry if there is any mistaikes, i am still learning this language.. :)
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey , just wanna say I love this story. Sasuke being able to change is awesome!!! Favorite part , I'm not too sure want else you could add , iwakna see how the relationship deepens, like what do people think about them, and how sasuke is a actually copeing :)
Fanastic story!!!!
Fanastic story!!!!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the idea you have there, with him being able to change forms at will, more for Naruto, huh/ ^_^
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. best of both worlds!
Keep up the good work! ^^
Keep up the good work! ^^
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think both ways, first female then male. Double your pleasure double the fun.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!!! I think sasuke should lose his viginity as a female. I would love to see little naruto's with black hair and little sasuke's with blue eyes running around. That would be so kawaii!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaay! sasuke can be a boy again! i like this story alot! its very original!! i think Sasuke should lose his virginity in his male form, because that is his original form, and cause, well, i'm a yaoi fan. ^--^ please update as soon as you can! ::heart::