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for Bullet

by Mako75

person Avonne
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man this story is so full of like everything related to WIN. I love the set up and how they interact together. I wish there was more to read. I hope you plan on updating this thing soon! Along with PWTT - love that fic!
person Imagy
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LAWL
I loved them both, babe~!
The first one, totally and complete sex-a-licious
and the second
so cute!
both were incredibly hilarious, too
couldn't stop laughing
can't wait for more little "bullet"s
especially of NaruSasu goodness!
(I'm not so into the other pairings *shrug*)
'til then, lovey ^o^
person basilika
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it's quite good as a separete story, maybe you shouldn't put a lot of oneshots in this one, but just go on with the story you have now.
person Nami
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Geeez, this thing is cute! So figgin cute! I loved the whole thing, and I can't wait for the next part. As to other pairings... KisaIta D:? When Sasuke said 'Have fun', my brain said 'and can I watch' XD.
person Charlie
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They've had tons of sex already but we've never read about it.
I can't believe you would do that to us.
I was really looking forward to that.
person kittycat
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. Your doing a awesome job! Hope you up date soon!!!
person qwerty
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's so funny... Sasuke keeping a scoreboard about him and the playground.
update
person gilliath
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell on high heels that was hot. Or maybe I should say fy faan va bra;)
person Ivy
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will you add more chapters of this? It was really cool =) Also a Shino/Kiba pairing would rock!
person Chria
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So funny and great! LMAO! Please continue this. I loved Naruto's last line. He sure was lucky. lol