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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE !!!!!! add more to this story i'm begging you.
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poetic
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is this a repost - i know i've read this before - if it was enjoyed it again
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH!!
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I loved it. ^^
<3<3<3
I loved it. ^^
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There were some minor mistakes but other than that this was very well written. I liked this a lot!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful; poetic. Needs a beta!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't remeber if i reviewed this already, buuuut.. i think it's the 4th or the 5th time I'm re-reading this, hehe. anyway, it's a wonderful one-shot. ^_^v
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely... powerful imagery... intense... dramatic and beautiful.
Can I hope to see some more... ?
Can I hope to see some more... ?
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, this is amazing. Touched me in ways I haven't felt for a while now, just poetic and beautiful.
The flow, feeling of the story is wonderful, and your simplistic and special phrasing really hits effectively for this and especially the /feel/ of this story.
It's just lovely. So beautiful. I enjoyed it so much, the feelings it invoked the whole way through :)
Thank you so much for writing such a lovely fic.
The flow, feeling of the story is wonderful, and your simplistic and special phrasing really hits effectively for this and especially the /feel/ of this story.
It's just lovely. So beautiful. I enjoyed it so much, the feelings it invoked the whole way through :)
Thank you so much for writing such a lovely fic.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great oneshot! It had a lot of misspellings but it was easy to understand what you meant. I liked how you highlighted Naruto's jealously and made Sasuke appear so gentle and caring plus maintaining his hard exterior. It is sweet. Much love because you have talent for expressing complex emotions with these characters. :D