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for Mating Troubles

by AbaresDaArk

person yaoi_reader
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,

nice start, keep with the update and the good work. I don't mind writer block as long as you return with a kick in the gut come back. Love for the fox :)

read you later
person Word_Slave
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's not going to be what we think??? hn.
talk to me girl
person dark Kennith
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(forgot to log in *groan*)

needs more yiff
person Ryu Kaze
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds interesting and I would like to see it continued...seems to be a Naruto/Sakura fic
person Raholea
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*prances and waves banner* i can beta if you want!!! well, i'm offering! am a writer myself so i know what that's like. drop me a note if interested! can respond quickly and have plenty of free time. *waves*
person Cyraxr
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm hm hm Interesting beginning to this tale I would like to see more and if you need a beta I volunteer. Signed a fan of Hinata, Kurenai, Anko, and Tayuya.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey if you want I can help you with your story.. JTB8834@aol.com... I have a good way of thinking how things should go but my wording isn't all that... I helped a few people with their stories...E-mail me if you want
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
semms like a good start... But I have a question what happened to their hate hate relationship... They never got along so what happened
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad..let us ponder on who the mate could be. Just FYI - mating is spelled with one t, not to. You should probably get an editor of some sort to look over the material. Otherwise, good job!
person mike
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It has promise I hope you continue the story.