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for ANBU, We Have a Problem

by Hestia

schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, my, my! I am so in love with this series! And this chapter had so many spectacular lines, like: lt'd cause an SM orgy in a nunnery.
and, That was when Shu's problem reached the catastrophic stage, beyond mere snafu. Total clusterfuck. That was a riot!

And then there is this part, ...fighting his desire to pull out his hard cock and masturbate thinking about just what all he’d begged for. Uh oh! Sounds like Shu himself is experiencing some of the same quandries Kotetsu is; Ko is turning out to be more into men that he wants to be and Shu is turning out to be more of a superfreak! than he wants to be.

I love how you make Kakashi the Sex God Extrordinaire of Konoha-I remember reading a story a while back with he and Genma and Raidou, I believe it was, (heh, you probably wrote it XD) where he had of course used his Sharingan to copy all this porn and was giving head and whatnot and I was like, HELLZ YEAH he'd copy that! I see Kakashi's sexuality as being...opportunistic? Whenever the opportunity presents itself, (and yes, sometimes you have to make things happen, because Kami helps those who help themselves) I think Kakashi will go for it, whether it be with a man or a woman (or both), him being on top or bottom (or both XD) because it's sex, and as long as he is getting some, I don't think it matters too much who or where or when or how.

Anyhow, props for another great kink series!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't think of a way for him to solve his problems either...
person tash1021
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness poor Shu :(**sniff sniff**
u have to continue pleaseeee
you can leave Shu being abused and manipulated by Ibiki
he need his pretty
even if Kotetsu is a dumb shit-_-
person llyoung
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shu (don't worry Shu everything will turn out ok in the end). Thanks for another wonderful story.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... That is one fu*** up ANBU... Poor SHu... T.T Darn it... I believe I am gonna fall in love with him so hard... and maybe cry like a kitten...nyah! Thank you!!! I can happily work on my paper now!!! *Grins*
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i find myself repeating poor shu-kun, but he really just needs a break. bad tetsu for breaking his heart, and naughty ibiki for having fun with that^_^V
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!!!!!!
SHU NEEDS COMFORT. SOMEBODY BETTER GET IN THERE, EVEN IF IT'S ONLY TURTLE OR BOAR OR KAKASHI OR EVEN FREAKING KUROHYOU, THOUGH I CANNOT HONESTLY SEE KUROHYUO HUGGING ANYONE BUT IZUMO EVER.
Shuuuuuuu. ;_;

....though seriously, the title of this piece made me laugh so hard, I couldn't even click the link for several minutes. XD

And then.... SHUUUUUU. (But I'm glad to know Turtle had a nice time. He's such a sweet little boo. ♥ )
person drivven
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stunned.... Am crying for Shu and Kotetsu. That's just soooo disturbing. Well written....but sooo disturbing. Please, please, please write more soon. I really need some of those images out of my head. (Powerful images, you did a great job. I just really need something a little less.....painful.)

Thanks for the quick update. Sorry for whining.
person bloody_rose
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Shu …
I like to say I enjoy reading ur cat bowl series. I think I like Shino's problem the most, because it kind of reminded of the ugly duckling. Who thought he so ugly that no one wanted him but in the end he was wrong. That reminds me of Shino. The ugly duckling is one of my favorite children stories. Also I think u describe the ANBU emotions turmoil better in that story then in Iuka's problem. I think you started the story off great. Poor Shu has the worst luck. I hope Shu and Kotetsu get together. I thought Kotetsu and going to bottom but know I don't know with what happen with Ibiki. Shoot…. I liked Ibiki but shoot Im mad at him know. I cant wait see to see what happens next.

Oh on a side note um Im glady ur going to start up D/S again that's what made me start reading your stories. OOHH and I love them. ^_^
person j.s
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor shu.i love him
update soon
caus its soo god...at first these stories didnt have much of a plot
but each new series is getting better and better
and now i cant stay away