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for Icha Icha Incident

by MoveThemHands

person kanaro
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! This is such a good story so far! I'm sad that Jaraiya's part was so short, but oh well. I can't wait to read more!
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cracks knuckles* Hey Anon let me introduce myself. I am Sara's personal online bodyguard *grabs brass knuckles* i cant wait for you to make another post... and if you dont like yaoi then WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU IN THE YAOI SECTION, YOU FUCKING HOMOPHOBE.
person Melony
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol... How he get in the book in the first place?... Please update soon I can't wait for what happens...
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. It hilarious, please update soon.
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, really good story sara and c-chan. cant wait for the next chapter... i almost stopped reading it in the middle of the first chapter with the taunts from the kids. that really pissed me off... and i love sasuke in this story... cant wait for more...
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Anon, Are you familier with fictionpress or Quizilla? I've read your colorful reviews on those sites as well. I have one thing to say to you. Get over yourself. Your opinion isn't appreciated, and if you are so high and mighty about God what are you doing on this site. Hello, people write about that stuff here. Don't like it, then don't read it. you have no right to condemn those who do. If you are going to say you don't like something keep it constructive. Oh by the way, the person you reviewed about has your reviews posted on quizilla. I loved reading them, it was a really good laugh, do write more that I can mock. Oh, and feel free to pigeonhole me on my terrible use of grammar. I'm sure you can come up with very interesting and debase names for me. I look forward to it. Guys don't listen to anything Anon says. Your story is good. I thoroughly enjoy reading it, and I can't wait for you to continue.
person charmpit
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so quickly.
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol.. poor Naru-chan... the captain's already set his sights on the blond and we all know that's it for him....won't be a virgin for lo~ong... XD
person Jess
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I loved it. Love love love love LOVE!!! Need new chapter now... Or else I'll shrivel up and die! And be a ghost. And pray to God that Sasuke doesn't try and see if I'm one... Wouldn't mind if Kiba tried though. Hn. Just not the duck butt. Ah, getting off track...

Anywho, yeah... I liked it! 10/10! Whooo!!!
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so just what i needed, having the worst day of 2008, but this made me smile. thank you! hope you update soon, this is such like an episode of are you afraid of the dark or something, nice contrast to all the blocks of angst floating around this site, and your writing style is easy to follow as well, and authentic. Hope to hear more soon ^.^