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for Icha Icha Incident

by MoveThemHands

person Anon
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what did you crackwhores do, rip off the first cheesy romance novel you could find? God, you two-bit yaoi sluts are disgusting. Stop making every male character gay for fucks sake! My only consolation is that you bitches will burn for eternity in the deepest pits of hell, both for being fag-lovers and for writing this piece of shit excuse for a story. Blow me and die cunts!
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy we wrote something together :D
person Alex
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahah. xDD The last part made me laugh, since my theory about Naruto being an utter retard proves true. Sasuke is such a pervert, hah! Not to mention his weird-ass ways of being a ghostbuster (hah, get it?)

Old man Sarutobi is conniving. He's socool that I want to hug him.
You two honeyloves make my life complete, even with that angsty beginning. :D And I heart you guys for your indefinite awesomeness. :]] The story looks to be both promising and hilarious, and I'm looking forward to reading some more.
person beautifullove348
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I'm definitely interested. Wow, what a fine way to find out if someone's a ghost ^__^ The plot seems very creative and I can't wait for the next update! :)
person fluffy_cloud
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looks interesting. can't wait for the next chapter ~_^
person kinkou
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhh... *evil grins* I like this already. It holds so much promise. PLease don't update soon.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wheee! this looks fun! I really hope you decide to carry this one to the end *sparkly eyes*

captain uchiha, and first mate kiba ha! i love how kiba talks its awesome.

and what is up with the guy from the library sending children into books lol Oh and those kids need to back the hell up yo! what do they care if naruto wants to take it up the cornhole?! DWL
person Snugglee__Fishee
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, nice! I love it! Why do they tease Naruto though?(or did it say it and I missed something?) Also, I can't wait to find out how he's in an Island or ship or w/e it is he's going be with(with Sasuke right?). Anyways, update soon or whenever you can! I would love it if you did!(PS-XD, Sasuke's a dumb ass! wow, what a way to find out is someone's real or not....what if ghosts can materialize themselves! KISSING WOULDN'T HELP!XD!)
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this so far. It kinda reminds me of a twist on the neverending story. I can't wait to read more, update soon.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way that Sasuke determined whether Naruto was a ghost or not!! :D Looks like Naruto is in for an adventure! Love the concept for this story! :)