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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter as usual. We're getting deeper into Itachi's feelings on what happened and I'm lovin' every minute of it.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another kick ass chapter! this story is just so awesome, keep up the excellent writing! ja ne :)
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a little bit of a tear jerker. I look forward to your next chapter.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really very good. I'd like it alot if you updated again soon!
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this one. Itachi is so human in this one. I had hoped that he would turn out like this in the series, but I'm glad that it did in your fic. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily after getting her fix*
Gaara=perfect confidant for Sakura
I really enjoyed this chapter! I think my favorite part was Itachi's dream of helping her out when she was little. That was great, but poor Sakura...I wonder if she'll tell them soon or if Gaara will be convinced in some way to give a hint as to what she's going through to the hokage. This chapter was well worth the wait and thanks so much for updating! :)
Ezzy
Gaara=perfect confidant for Sakura
I really enjoyed this chapter! I think my favorite part was Itachi's dream of helping her out when she was little. That was great, but poor Sakura...I wonder if she'll tell them soon or if Gaara will be convinced in some way to give a hint as to what she's going through to the hokage. This chapter was well worth the wait and thanks so much for updating! :)
Ezzy
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really loved everything about this chapter. The look back at Itachi playing the 'hero' was something that made me smile. I'm also really truly enjoying the entrance of Gaara into your story.
You've really done a fantastic job characterizing him. From the way he moves to the way his dialogue is spoken is true Gaara and I really applaud that. It seems out of all Naruto characters Gaara's personality is the hardest to get right. His is the one I have seen be the worst in all fics. I'm enjoying this friendship she is forming with him. Honestly, if it wasn't an Ita/Saku fic I'd probably like to see those two together.
But that aside, I truly feel bad for Sakura. I'm anxious to see what will happen now that she basically walked away from Naruto, Sai and Sasuke. I know they must be feeling betrayed at the thought of her keeping something so crucial from them.
Another brilliant chapter darlin' Please keep them coming!!!
You've really done a fantastic job characterizing him. From the way he moves to the way his dialogue is spoken is true Gaara and I really applaud that. It seems out of all Naruto characters Gaara's personality is the hardest to get right. His is the one I have seen be the worst in all fics. I'm enjoying this friendship she is forming with him. Honestly, if it wasn't an Ita/Saku fic I'd probably like to see those two together.
But that aside, I truly feel bad for Sakura. I'm anxious to see what will happen now that she basically walked away from Naruto, Sai and Sasuke. I know they must be feeling betrayed at the thought of her keeping something so crucial from them.
Another brilliant chapter darlin' Please keep them coming!!!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting read so far. I like the character interaction, it gives us a good look at how everyone is meshed together while at the same time you've given us some tempting glimpses into the workings of the Akatsuki and Itachi and Kisame's perspective on the situation thus far. I also thought it was interesting that Gaara was the first person Sakura told because, as had been her concern in the first place, Gaara, unlike the rest of team 7, would be far less likely to do something dramatic. I'll be curious to see what happens now that the rest of them have an inkling that something larger is bothering Sakura. Particularly if Naruto DOES go to the extreme of telling Tsunade because, then again, it would stand to reason that now that Sakura's had a chance to let the larger picture of how all Itachi's attack went wrong Tsunade would probably be another person Sakura would trust to tell the whole story while keeping it a secret. (Thus keeping the boys in the same spot they were in the first place.) I'll also be interested in seeing what Itachi's next move is now that he's gotten an idea of what the damage is. Keep up the good work!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really great. I love how you have the dreams. I have read just about all of your stories. I enjoy your writing so much. There are a few that I would like to see finished, but I would like to read what happens in this on much more. Looking forward to your next update. have a great day.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really getting good. I would've loved for Itachi to turn out to be the wronged one and not the maniacal looney tune that he is. I'm loving this I can't wait to watch it progress.
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