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oh come on, how could you just end it there, LOL...that was just plain MEAN...hehehe. I hope Kakashi doesn't try to get in the way of Naruto and the Ramen....SHUDDERS he could be seriously hurt...LOL

THANKS:"D

I gotta know, what happens next??

AHAHAHAHA!!! omfg, i love it. cant wait for the next chapter... and why didn't you tell me you where posting this today. oh well, well here goes your long review like i promised. I really like the plot. sounds almost like fight club, which i loved btw. one of the things I find hard to believe naruto would say is "Freaking ouch." not sure if you where just trying to keep the language clean, but naruto saying freaking ouch just doesnt seem to fit his personality. there where a couple minor grammatical errors but im not gunna ding you for those. overall, i give this first chapter a 8/10 star rating. cant wait for the next chapter.

roflmao! I could so see Naruto taking a 'nose dive' into the ring! Though I am slightly surprised that he didn't beat the k rap out of Jiraiya for using his favorite food as a form of entertainment.

I can also see him kicking Kakashi's ass because he thinks Kakashi is going to try and get some for himself. Rofl. Great job and I look forward to seeing how this turns out. Ja ne.

finish or write more it was really getting good

I love how Naruto didn't even bother to attack, but dove face first. *nuzzles Sara* I lurve Joo. And yer perdy... Xd. Handsy. Oh god. I love it.