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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was very hot! Thanks for posting this. Hope you'll post something else related to this fic. The idea is good enough to utilize it further :P But if not - it was a great one-shot anyways :)
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when i began reading this story, the voice inside my head said, 'find naruto, find naruto'. i thought it was naruto which sasuke already set his eyes on but green eyes??? what the..?! suddenly gaara's image pop-up in my head. nooo...!!! haha. ookayyy... not really fond of sasuke x gaara. ehem, anyway, i kept on reading and eventually after finished it all, i am very, extremely satisfied with the outcome. now i can smile widely till reach both my ears ^___^ hehe
narusasu or sasunaru always!!! \^0^/
narusasu or sasunaru always!!! \^0^/
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww, so sad you're not making it a two-shot. I would have loved to see Sasuke chase after Naruto or something to start a relationship with each other because once you have the real thing, you can't go back! It's just not the same Sasuke! I also like the fact that at the bottom you cleared up some questions that were in my mind! I was wondering, how in the world did Naruto know where to find Sasuke and know what he did, buuuut you answered it! Mad props!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO GOOOOOOOOOOOD! I really liked the end and the part about the pedophile. A sequel would be very much loved.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh, now you can't just leave it there. Sasuke now has a reason to come back, or maybe Naruto could help him???? But please don't leave it there. You did have a couple of spelling mistakes. If you like, I can run through and grab them for you. Let me know NarutoKakashi@live.com
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was the best narusasu I've read in a looong time!! Really awesome, built up really really well and I do hope you'll give us a continuation of it...? It really (yeah, I use that word a lot, but only for good stuff xDD; ) makes you want more, want to know what happens next time they meet up! *begs for more!*
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, though I can't imagine Sasuke ever bottoming for anyone, much less Naruto. But can you make a fic with Naruto as uke. By the way, love the story.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome~! I loved it, and Sasuke is such a moron. Go home, Sasuke! Go home and get some from Naruto XD.
And I hope you don't listen to HPTR Fangirl unless Sasunaru is your bag. Nothing saddens me more then when people read a narusasu, comment on how they like it the other way, then ask for the revised pair ;;...
And I hope you don't listen to HPTR Fangirl unless Sasunaru is your bag. Nothing saddens me more then when people read a narusasu, comment on how they like it the other way, then ask for the revised pair ;;...