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for Pretend for me

by sakuyalove

schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way you wrote this. Naruto stalking Sasuke would have been okay, but it was better this way. I loved it.
=)
person takoyaki
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great concept! i'd love to see a sequel!
person rae
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was nice, any chance of a sequel?
person SasUke28
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome lemon!XP! XD! I thought it made sense too about the whole Naruto pretending to look different and he probably just dropped the henge instead of actually performing one! XD!
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very much!!!!
person Jelp
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, yay! I really hoped it'd be the real Naruto in the end, and I figured Sasuke would figure it out by Naruto calling his name. lol Sasuke should look for Naruto more often! :-) Cute fic. (And just as a side note, I was also corrected on this myself, so I figured I'd share the knowledge; the prostate isn't a bundle of nerves; it's, well, a prostate. Or a gland.) ~ Jelp
person Nikana
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god, oh god!!!O_o please! you have to make this longer.This is the better oneshot I've read in a really long time! Its just great! Mind you not just the rabid fangirl talking here, but actually the not so rabid one eyeing a quasi plot in a nearby future...plllleaassee???(inu puppy eyes)and Sas-uke is not so brilliant, am so glad someone actually tricked him for once.
Anyways, even if you are not up to make a long term story, this is enough to leave people gawking for a good ten min afterward the main reading
ByE O/_\O