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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome, nice pairings! Is there another chapter in the works???
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't review on most AU/AR stories, but this is an exception. This is probably the best AU/AR story I've ever read. The chapters were a little short, but the quality was astounding. I only hope this story won't be left in the dark cold hole of forgoten fanfics. You should try to perfect on fight scenes. Mainly because fight scenes tend to be the most strugeling for every author.
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice story, a very original idea. I have to admit, the naruto mikoto pairing is very intriging, hope to see another chapter soon
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thats really damn nice man
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
F@(&!#g sweet, man!!! Keep up the good work.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! That's a good start to a good story. I can't wait for it to develop. Keep it up and update soon!
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great kn ow whens the next chapter comming out .... plz say soon
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see Naruto in a foursome with all three, could you possibly write that?????
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For those that read this... what few couplings there will be are as follows.
Hinata and Hanabi find out Naruto doesn't want to hurt them and knows they'll get hurt if he breaks their hymen. They go to Mikoto for help, she gives them a toy... so you get Hinata and Hanabi.
Once they heal up, Mikoto joins the girls, followd shortly by Naruto who gives the sisters some one on one time, with mikoto taking the other, and finally with his stamina they all en up looking like krispy kreme donuts.
Hinata and Hanabi find out Naruto doesn't want to hurt them and knows they'll get hurt if he breaks their hymen. They go to Mikoto for help, she gives them a toy... so you get Hinata and Hanabi.
Once they heal up, Mikoto joins the girls, followd shortly by Naruto who gives the sisters some one on one time, with mikoto taking the other, and finally with his stamina they all en up looking like krispy kreme donuts.