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I Am,Seriously,Speechless.

I Just Had A Realization - Hiashi IS A Pervert!

Poor Hinata...No,Poor NEJI...What He Was About To Get After Such A Long Period Of Waiting...And The Dad Barges In.

Life Is So Unfair.

But This Was Beautifully Written.Very Much So.

LOVE IT! Oh, man! You gotta good story going on here! loves it!!!!

Go Neji/Hina!!!!

I have to say--I honestly wasn't expecting that to be the end. Could you take pity on us horny ones and grace us with another chappie? Please, oh pretty, pretty please?!!!

how long did u take to write this........... no offense but its rather short and is lacking details. cud be better and the sex aint all to great either.

I actually enjoyed this very much. I thought it was written very tastefully and thought it flowed nicely. I have seen many many poorly written fics and in my opinion this is not one of them.

I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes. If there were any they were very minor. Which already tells me that you did take time to look over and proof read this fic.

I think this is a clever little plot bunny you had. I like the idea of Hinata's rules, because in all honesty it seems like something she would infact do. Too bad for Neji that her dear old pop found them. ~_~

All in all I enjoyed this fic. I didn't find it extremely short. It's a one-shot they range in length. And I've seen much much shorter. You did great I hope to read more from you soon.

Wow, that was really good. Poor Neji though. I agree with him though, if you are going to get into trouble it shouldnt be over something little.