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for Fork in the Road-

by Mort

person fanfic fan
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really wish this was written better and lasted longer because its such a good idea and great triple pairing. I love the whole idea of both sharing Naruto and heim accepting it and the tensions between Sasuke and Neji but having them dissipate eventually. There's so much good potential in this story I wish you would have really went for it and made something good into something great.
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and revewed erlyer to that effect but I had to ome back and tell you that I cracked up when I saw your name was Mort!!!! My sister LOVED the Adams Family and we have allways called her Mort... short for Morticia becouse her name is Patricia. It was so cool to see the name again that I had to comentr!!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! The fox really has them wrapped around his little paw doesn't he??!? Love the story so far.
person mls
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!! can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!
person Word_Slave
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you continue this!!! I can't wait for more. Also, if you put up the pairing on the front, you might get more people interested.
Slave
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written fic. I like the raw emotion you brought out in each character. One of the best threesome I read so far. It was written very classy not the lust driven ones most threesomes tend to be. Great job. Look forward to reading more of your works. Until next time, take care and god bless.