rate_review Reviews

Thanks you for writing such an enjoyable story.

Chap.3
I am really impressed with how this story is written and how much depth the characters show! I am pleased with Naruto's maturity in dealing with Sakura and her annoying self importance. I love the glimps inside Naruto and Sasuke's thinking and am looking forward to the time when Sasuke finally realizes that he loves Naruto and when Naruto realizes it himself....have to wonder who will discover the fact first?? HEHEH Oh the suspense!!!! SQUEEL!!! :)

Chap. 4
Poor Naruto out of food and his pride injured at getting found out about it.....poor Naruto he tries so hard all the time.

I have to wonder about the person they are working for....he seems like he's up to no good.....hope he doesn't plan anything bad towards Sasuke or Naruto...he'll lose if he tries anything!!

Chap. 5
I find I rather enjoy the glimps into past lemons that have happened to our favorite guys in the past!! :)

Ok I tolerate....as best as I can Sakura....cause she is on the team...but rather LOVE the times that reality puts her in her place and that is with Sasuke and Naruto always together!!! Can't see them any other way!!

I just LOVED Sasuke's response to Narutos joke and the resulting dobe toss into a wall was just PRICELESS!!! You can so picture that happening and it totally fits their relationship perfectly!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT

You're writing style is amazing!

Oh my god.
this was absolutely wonderful.
oh my fucking holy jesus christ.
i was constantly crying from chapter 10 'till the end!
lol xD
thank you so so much for this fic, i cherish it deeply :)

waaah! it's all finished now? sniff sniff darn good job, my lady, although it seems a stretch that sasu would wait years for naru so am guessing the sage training took months? ;-)

anyhoo, great job!

I want an epilogue. Is is too late to ask for one? I didn't know you had already finished the story. This is one of the things that I don't like about aff because one cant have an author in review alert. Anyway, I do feel that the story needs the epilogue just to see the reunion and possibly the last lemon? Please?? Thanks for now...I need to reread to remember all. My email is marqqui @ yahoo . com drop me a line and tell me what you think.

i would love if you wrote an epilogue i think for your first fanfic it was great i loved very chapter thanks for writing and definately add the lemon man i love those

Hey, I just wanted to reveiw because I think this needs an epilouge.

Personally, where it left off is a good place to end it, but an extra chapter to explain how everything tied up wouldn't hurt.
(Plus another lemon{s} would be lovely)

At first, when I was on chapter 9-10ish, I was thinking to myself:
"Shit, this isn't gonna end happily is it...?"

But what I loved the most was how you ended it without it being too fluffy, sappy and general not really in-character for the two of them.
The conclusion was emotional without all the waterworks and heartgushing feelings.
But poor Jiraiya!
He was never my favorite, but awww~
I feel bad for Naruto the most.

Ah, so yeah, I'd say more but I'm exhausted from a long day.
I just wanted to drop by and tell you how much I loved the fic and an epilogue would be awesome, but not entirely required
(like I said you left it at a good place, but everyone loves more lemons ;D)

Good luck with future fics, I really do love your writing style~