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for Growing together, growing apart

by Raelyn

person Risa
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say that I found myself moved to tears when Sasuke said he wanted kids in order to end his relationship with Naruto and when Naruto sought Sasuke for his emotional comfort over the death of Jiraiya. Moved. To. Tears.
Nice angst and drama! I am looking forward to the epilogue. Take care!
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to be at work first thing in the morning. Early early. Like I have to wake up at 6. Yet despite this, I stayed up until 2:42 in the morning reading this whole story in one sitting.

I have to say, this story was great. I loved it. The flow and storytelling was well done. The characters were fleshed out and believable (no OOCs). I loved how their relationship developed, broke apart, and came around full circle. ^^ This was a wonderful piece of literature and a joy to read. Personally, I'd be thrilled to read an epilogue. I hope you write one, as I'd like to see them reunite. Either way, I'm adding this story to my recommended list. Fantastic work.

I look forward to your next endeavor.
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
totally needs an epilogue. i want more!
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it's almost over.
I loved the last chapter.
Thank for the update.
person kinai26
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was a cool ending. Please make an epilog though... I would love the read about their reunion... and will Sasuke find a way to have kids anyway... or will Naruto come up with something?
I really loved your story #huggles#
person phamtonsnow
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so sweet!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see an epilogue for these 2. Nice job on the chap.
person TheSimi
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been an amazing story and although I liked the endig I would very much appriciate an epilogue.

Thank you so much for thsi story!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No don't end it without a lemon!
person Ladynight
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, I read it from the very begining. (I just suck at reveiwing) I like how you gave the readers hope that they'd be together in the future. I wouldn't mind an epiloge.