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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just read this story all in one go and i love it. I love the way you are lining this up with actual canon parts from the manga and your way of storytelling is great. Please do update soon.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I know Kaiya is going to rip Sasuke and Naruto apart even more. I'm just curious who she'll gravitate towards. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have done such a good job with the storey i cried they need to get back together its to sad
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters brought me to tears. I'm curious as to what Sasuke has to talk to the Hokage about. I don't understand why he pushed him away...He and Naruto could raise any child together once they find a surrogate for Sasuke's babies.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled upon your story today and I have to say it is very interesting! It was a wonderful read and I can't wait to see it continue. Very realistic portrayal of Sasuke's and Naruto's feelings and interactions.
Awesome job!
Awesome job!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love mpreg only because the thought of them not procreating is just so sad, especially when they are the only one left.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
I'm so sad naruto and sasuke aren't together anymore, i hope they will find a way to each other again, they obviously miss each other so much. Tjis new kayia parson seems interesting and thoughtful, i wonder how she will work it out with the 2 boys! I can't wait to read more! Please don't let us wait to long, please!
I'm so sad naruto and sasuke aren't together anymore, i hope they will find a way to each other again, they obviously miss each other so much. Tjis new kayia parson seems interesting and thoughtful, i wonder how she will work it out with the 2 boys! I can't wait to read more! Please don't let us wait to long, please!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I was becoming more and more depressed while reading. I hope that Sasuke and Naruto can work things out with each other; if they stay separated it will only hurt them more. I'm glad that you are portraying Sakura in such a good light; she really isn't that mean of a person, especially if it is one of her friends that is hurting. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is kickass! Anyway...I love all the tension. This story is an addicting read. Naruto and Sasuke are hopeless without eachother and I can't wait for them to realise it too. =)