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for Growing together, growing apart

by Raelyn

schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cried!!!!
You need to continue with this story!! I thought Naruto could have kits, and Sasuke doesn't need to have
sex with a woman, I really hope it doesn't become Sakura because than that would be down right cruel!!!
keep up the good work!!!

ya ne!!!
person caidanu
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gahhh...this chapter was so damn sad. It's so realistic though and I could see their relationship actually taking that turn if this acutally happened in the Manga. I really like this fic; their personalities are very acurate. Thanks for the great chapter and I can't wait to read more.

cai
person dragonlady sakura
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowie! You have a really good plot and I love how you write. I admit, I'm envious. It makes me want to write a story myself. I eagerly await more chapters.
person Donnae
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved every bite of it and cant wait for the next chapter. its was geting so damned good too * silentily cursing u * well night or is it morning
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NARUTO!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! please update soon... i hate "killer" cliffhangers
person Mort
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent- I just read ch7-

I am enjoying every chapter you put forth-
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Please update soon...you have me holding my breath!!!
person Charlie
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The snake and the weasel are dead so I have no idea who is after him.
I was wondering if you could add a Kiba/Neji to the story. I just started reading about the pair and I love it. If you want to read it, it's called "Claiming a Mate".
Just to let you know, I wouldn't be adverse to the idea of this story being a Mpreg. Naruto's comment made me think about that.
Thanks for the update.
person Anaheyla
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Naruto's been hurt! KICK THEIR ASSES SASUKE!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, man the shit has hit the celing cant' wait for more